FOR YOU

hey little girl,
with the voice as soft as the wind on a muggy summer afternoon.
hey little girl,
with the eyes of chocolite candy kisses delivered on valentines day.
i want to tell you how much i fear losing you,
but i cant find the words.
i cant find the words to describe the daily gnawing, muscle tensing,
ache in the pit of my stomach,
that manifests from my fear, frustration, and insecurity.

don't play too close to the open window.
hold my hand the whole time we walk, and stay on the inside.
watch the stove.
did we proof all the sockets?

don't worry you will get better soon.
we'll sit together in the ice water to break this fever.
keep ypur head up, together we'll get through.
did we do everything we could?

hey little girl,
with a smile as pure as an artesian well.
hey little girl,
my expressionless eyes create rivers of flowing memories.

hey little girl,
i'm so sorry you got sick.
my sweet little girl
i've thought of you with my bic against my wrist.
but i have to stay.

i have to stay.

hey little girl,
who looks down on me,
this father's scarred heart still beats
and all the good i'll ever do
is for you.

I'M SORRY BUT THAT IS DOWN RIGHT CREEPY

Dude, I don't know how a poem about the death of a little girl is
"creepy" even if it is poorly written, but you go ahead man.

spay,have a heart dude,it looks to me like he lost his daughter
would you write a poem if you lost your child?
think about it before you give that smart assed answer brewing in your
head,then say something that showes your brains,not your ass...M.
*no offense,just my take on this*

i am sorry about your pain. very nice poem

Thank you, Michael and Sillygirl that poem is very near and dear to my
heart and I'm you got something out of it. I wrote it for anyone else
who may experience something similar.

Im so sorry for your loss, I cannot even come close to thinking what
your pain is inside, it would be really hard to stay here!!

I lost my 15 year old niece and that pain still lives with me
at least once a week, and she died 9 years ago....sorry man.

Your words here tell us all, whats in your heart......
Pray and wait until your calling...GOD BLESS YOU!!

Im sorry, but some words really need to stay here longer...
So this poem has come back up, to be looked at again!!!

,

Its never easy to write much less express your feelings in any way about
the loss of a child. Depoet you did so with dignity and feeling, a great
work here. I am truly sorry for your loss.

.

im sorry Depoet for your loss, i couldnt even start to imagine how i
would fell losing my daughter. and your poem is well written dont worrie
;)

Thanks guys, at least you were all classy enought to not say "creepy"
like that other dumbass.

I am so sorry for your loss. I know that time will never take the pain
away, but please remember that you have family here, and if you want to
talk, we will be honored to listen.

SORRY I AM VERY PRITECTIVE OVER MY SON, AND YOUR POEM JUST FREAKED ME
OUT.

tuly heartfelt and sad. it was beautiful depot really beautiful

truly beautiful DeP and my heart goes out to ya man been there b4 long
ago so i do know yuor pain,and feel deeply for your loss!and if u need
to talk fire away anytime dude!

 

Very beauitful poem,

I know I don't know how you feel or how much you hurt but the words of
the poem brought me very close to the pain you are in and I can only
imangen how much you hurt so sorry for your loose my heart goes out to
you.