Topic: Hypnotic State
greeneyedlady42's photo
Mon 12/18/06 09:46 PM
A voice that thunders like Chariots
Yet it can patter like cool rain
Hands strong enough to build monuments
of stone
Yet gently soothe away pain

Eyes so piercing they see right thru
A lying heart of guile
But sweet enough when they look at me
I know I can only smile

Character as deep as the sea
A love that despells all hate
How my love have you captured me
In this hypnotic state.

Sweet simple meekness of a child
That makes me want to protect you
Strength and pride carefree and wild
Makes me promise not to neglect you

Tell me of your fantasies.
Ill tell you of my dreams
Listen to my silent cries while
I soothe your painful screams.

Stare at me once again my love
With eyes as blue as slate
And I will live in eternal bliss
In this hynotic state.

no photo
Mon 12/18/06 09:52 PM
WOWWY,,,, THAT WAS FILLED WITH A TRANCE OF LOVERS DREAMS.....
AND THE THOUGHT OF SOMEONE SPECIAL.................GOOD WORDS,,

stan4eVeR's photo
Mon 12/18/06 09:52 PM
Beautiful! Greeneyes!

greeneyedlady42's photo
Mon 12/18/06 09:56 PM
Thanks guys- I am grateful for your kind words.
Sweet dreams, see you tomorrow,Lord willing.

chismah's photo
Mon 12/18/06 10:11 PM
Very nice Green...thanks for sharing beautiful.

Sleep well and see you tomorrow..take care!!

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 12/19/06 10:29 PM
Heart felt My Lady, Heart felt.

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/19/06 10:34 PM
th clock is swinging back and forth,back and forth,,hmkkmm...
oh hey,uh,yea this one had my kinda in a daze!!!

really good!