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Small pin pricks of light
Stabbing in between the slits of my eyelids Morning again Time to rise and start the day I roll over and pull the pillow over my head Groaning the whole time How I long to stay curled up underneath the covers So warm and cozy Just me, the cats and my dreams With a grunt I roll over again and kick free from the blankets Sit up and swing my legs over the edge of the bed Reaching for a cigerette Lighting up Inhaling deeply I sit and ponder the nights dreams One stands out in my mind A dream never before dreamt It puzzles me Perplexes me Astounds me I shake my head to try to clear it from my memory It sticks tightly to recesses of my brain Glued tightly to my thoughts I know it will be popping into my mind all day At various times With a deep sigh I rise and begin my day And just for today I let the dream remain Not trying to analyze it Just let it soothe m when I need it throught out my day And just for today I hold the dream tightly For it is my salvation ****Ok this is going to be poem posted for a lil while, give me a week or so, I have to have my meds adjusted again and when I have them adjusted it makes me very zombie like for a lil while so writing doesn't come easy at this time.**** |
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it was beautiful CCP. We'll survive i guess until you start writing
again IF WE HAVE TO... |
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MISS..POET, THIS WAS A GOOD POEM AND IM NOT TAKING ANY MEDS
BUT I STILL HAVE MANY MOMENTS WHERE I AM LOST!!! AND WORDS JUST WILL NOT COME TO ME,...?? |
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It is very rare that the words will not come ot me, the only time for
sure that it happens is when they readjust my meds, always a stronger dosage, it just takes a lil time for my body and mind to get used to the adjustment and then the words come :) |
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We will be waiting, maybe even patiently
G |
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another dream,another poem is born...M.
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CCP, you can write with meds and without them hon.
to me you are the best, no ofence to the other writhers, your all good. but Im a fan.......lol,lol |
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no offense here Morena...I'm a fan too!
she writes really wonderful work, both light and dark sides, of poetry are within her words...M :)~ |
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Thank you for sharing your work. I hope you write another one soon. I
live and breath poetry all day (in the middle of writing a book)and after going back and forth with my editor today, I thought I was tired of poetry, but after I read your poem I realized I wasn't. p.s. It was the editor I was sick of. |
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Thanks depoet, as soon as the meds acclimate themselves to my system I
will be writing again. I too am in the middle of writing a book, though no publisher much less an editor at this time. Morena gurl, I have tried to write when first starting a new regimine of meds I just can't do it, I can't concentrate on it like I normally do.Thanks for being my biggest fan gurl, much love to you!! |
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Awww girl your poems are always good and very heart felt. Seems to put
us right into the moment and we can see what your writing. |
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yup...Ms Txs is right again...wonders if she wants th mods job?
just wondering...lol...M. |
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