Topic: Dreams Salvation
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Mon 12/18/06 06:24 AM
Small pin pricks of light
Stabbing in between the slits of my eyelids
Morning again
Time to rise and start the day
I roll over and pull the pillow over my head
Groaning the whole time
How I long to stay curled up underneath the covers
So warm and cozy
Just me, the cats and my dreams
With a grunt I roll over again and kick free from the blankets
Sit up and swing my legs over the edge of the bed
Reaching for a cigerette
Lighting up
Inhaling deeply
I sit and ponder the nights dreams
One stands out in my mind
A dream never before dreamt
It puzzles me
Perplexes me
Astounds me
I shake my head to try to clear it from my memory
It sticks tightly to recesses of my brain
Glued tightly to my thoughts
I know it will be popping into my mind all day
At various times
With a deep sigh I rise and begin my day
And just for today
I let the dream remain
Not trying to analyze it
Just let it soothe m when I need it throught out my day
And just for today
I hold the dream tightly
For it is my salvation




****Ok this is going to be poem posted for a lil while, give me a week
or so, I have to have my meds adjusted again and when I have them
adjusted it makes me very zombie like for a lil while so writing doesn't
come easy at this time.****


iceprincess's photo
Mon 12/18/06 06:37 AM
it was beautiful CCP. We'll survive i guess until you start writing
again IF WE HAVE TO...

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Mon 12/18/06 06:43 AM
MISS..POET, THIS WAS A GOOD POEM AND IM NOT TAKING ANY MEDS
BUT I STILL HAVE MANY MOMENTS WHERE I AM LOST!!!

AND WORDS JUST WILL NOT COME TO ME,...??

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Mon 12/18/06 06:46 AM
It is very rare that the words will not come ot me, the only time for
sure that it happens is when they readjust my meds, always a stronger
dosage, it just takes a lil time for my body and mind to get used to the
adjustment and then the words come :)

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 12/18/06 10:22 AM
We will be waiting, maybe even patiently

G

michael1313's photo
Mon 12/18/06 11:31 AM
another dream,another poem is born...M.

Morena350's photo
Mon 12/18/06 10:09 PM
CCP, you can write with meds and without them hon.
to me you are the best,

no ofence to the other writhers, your all good.
but Im a fan.......lol,lol

michael1313's photo
Mon 12/18/06 11:51 PM
no offense here Morena...I'm a fan too!
she writes really wonderful work,
both light and dark sides,
of poetry are within her words...M :)~

1depoet's photo
Tue 12/19/06 01:36 AM
Thank you for sharing your work. I hope you write another one soon. I
live and breath poetry all day (in the middle of writing a book)and
after going back and forth with my editor today, I thought I was tired
of poetry, but after I read your poem I realized I wasn't.

p.s. It was the editor I was sick of.

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Tue 12/19/06 02:03 AM
Thanks depoet, as soon as the meds acclimate themselves to my system I
will be writing again. I too am in the middle of writing a book, though
no publisher much less an editor at this time.

Morena gurl, I have tried to write when first starting a new regimine of
meds I just can't do it, I can't concentrate on it like I normally
do.Thanks for being my biggest fan gurl, much love to you!!

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/19/06 03:58 PM
Awww girl your poems are always good and very heart felt. Seems to put
us right into the moment and we can see what your writing.

michael1313's photo
Tue 12/19/06 10:44 PM
yup...Ms Txs is right again...wonders if she wants th mods job?

just wondering...lol...M.