Topic: Spirit's Realm
Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:23 PM
Spirit's Realm

Upon this sullen and placid throne
I ponder the thoughts that once were known.
The music has long since died
And rivers of tears have all but dried,
Yet I rule my world so well.

In darkness, my palace lay
Deep behind the guarded gate.
No fires that burn
Can light this place,
For cold are the winds of change.

With heavy thump,
A lifeless clump,
My worries fall dead to my feet.

The box I hold
With treasures untold,
Hidden within
Are the many thoughts
Of hopes and dreams.

The last of my riches
Thus hidden in vain,
The remnants of
What keeps me sane
And bids me live from day to day.
I smile for this belongs to me.

All that I had was taken away,
Still building the kingdom
You see today.

The groundbreaking is labor at best,
I entertain at joyous request,
Yet here do I sit on a throne of gold,
Daring to live a life uncold.

Never you'll see this world gone dark
For illusion and will have cast the spark,
Thus created this dream by me.

Lost in the wonder of dazzling light,
Surrounding you in the dream I weave,
Protecting you in my hope and might,
Careful not to cause your flight,
For you are the most precious gem I see.

I know I cannot make you stay
And willingly
You can go your way,
For I am used to the bonds
That break.
I just ask a piece you'll take
Of my heart
That's been left unmade.
Please do not fear this hand of fate.

I understand you need much more
So here I stand at open door
And bid you farewell in peace.

Forever I am and always will be
A spirit in nature and faded in life
For I can be nothing more
Or less than me.

Fadedspirit 11/5/2007

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:26 PM
smokin

pkh's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:27 PM
I enjoy your writtings you are a kind spirit

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:32 PM
and the you I see,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Priceless my friend flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:33 PM
Thanks MirrorMirror

Awww, thanks pkh. I'm glad you like the writings and yours are enjoyed as well.:smile: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:33 PM
flowerforyou (((Fade))) flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/18/08 06:36 PM
Aww thanks LAMom :smile:

(((MsTeddyBear))) Thanks :smile:

shauna22's photo
Tue 02/19/08 04:33 AM
flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Tue 02/19/08 04:51 AM
Very nicebigsmile

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/19/08 05:45 AM
Thanks shauna. :smile:

Thanks Mystique :smile:

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 02/19/08 05:48 AM
very well written, i enjoyed it.

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 02/19/08 05:55 AM
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. :smile:

kc0003's photo
Tue 02/19/08 10:43 PM
very nice faded

really enjoyed this one

no photo
Wed 02/20/08 12:41 AM
Superb write my friend.May our spirit continuosly yearn & always be free.May we embrace the true richness of life as is was meant to be.Godspeed!CyPoet.:smile:

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 07:28 AM
Thanks kc and CyPoet. :smile:

songstress1's photo
Wed 02/20/08 08:19 AM
Oh my spirit such lovely words! This is one of the best poems you have written and I have liked them all.flowerforyou

klugman's photo
Wed 02/20/08 11:33 AM
Very nice write Faded:wink:

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 02/20/08 05:03 PM
Awww, thanks songstress, It's nice to see you again.:smile:

Thanks klugman, glad you enjoyed it.:smile: