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Spirit's Realm
Upon this sullen and placid throne I ponder the thoughts that once were known. The music has long since died And rivers of tears have all but dried, Yet I rule my world so well. In darkness, my palace lay Deep behind the guarded gate. No fires that burn Can light this place, For cold are the winds of change. With heavy thump, A lifeless clump, My worries fall dead to my feet. The box I hold With treasures untold, Hidden within Are the many thoughts Of hopes and dreams. The last of my riches Thus hidden in vain, The remnants of What keeps me sane And bids me live from day to day. I smile for this belongs to me. All that I had was taken away, Still building the kingdom You see today. The groundbreaking is labor at best, I entertain at joyous request, Yet here do I sit on a throne of gold, Daring to live a life uncold. Never you'll see this world gone dark For illusion and will have cast the spark, Thus created this dream by me. Lost in the wonder of dazzling light, Surrounding you in the dream I weave, Protecting you in my hope and might, Careful not to cause your flight, For you are the most precious gem I see. I know I cannot make you stay And willingly You can go your way, For I am used to the bonds That break. I just ask a piece you'll take Of my heart That's been left unmade. Please do not fear this hand of fate. I understand you need much more So here I stand at open door And bid you farewell in peace. Forever I am and always will be A spirit in nature and faded in life For I can be nothing more Or less than me. Fadedspirit 11/5/2007 |
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I enjoy your writtings you are a kind spirit
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and the you I see,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Priceless my friend
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Thanks MirrorMirror
Awww, thanks pkh. I'm glad you like the writings and yours are enjoyed as well. |
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(((Fade)))
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Aww thanks LAMom
(((MsTeddyBear))) Thanks |
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Very nice
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Thanks shauna.
Thanks Mystique |
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very well written, i enjoyed it.
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Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it.
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very nice faded
really enjoyed this one |
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Superb write my friend.May our spirit continuosly yearn & always be free.May we embrace the true richness of life as is was meant to be.Godspeed!CyPoet.
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Thanks kc and CyPoet.
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Oh my spirit such lovely words! This is one of the best poems you have written and I have liked them all.
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Very nice write Faded
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Awww, thanks songstress, It's nice to see you again.
Thanks klugman, glad you enjoyed it. |
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