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lonelyteardrop's photo
Fri 12/15/06 07:57 PM
hold my hand
I'll hold yours
hold me please
an don't let go
accept me for who I am
I'll accept you as my friend
please don't fear what you
cant understand
let me make you smile
even through my tears
I wish so much to be
accepted in this world
of silence without a voice
only tears stream my checks
take my hand and accept me
for I am still who I am

Fanta46's photo
Fri 12/15/06 07:59 PM
Wow, That is beautiful!

iceprincess's photo
Fri 12/15/06 08:00 PM
very pretty and somewhat sad and lonely. you write beautifully

stan4eVeR's photo
Fri 12/15/06 09:14 PM
beautiful ltd i accept everyone for who they are,and they have to accept
me for who i am cause i don't know how to be anything else, and wouldn't
want to be! i'm so sorry that tears stream those beautiful cheeks. i'ld
give u a big hug and brush away those tears with laughter if i could!my
heart goes out to u .Smile :) ltd dammit man what i wouldn't give to
be18-20 years younger and look like i did then, i would drive my crazy
arse all the way to cali and do something idiotic to make u laugh all
the tears away! but i can't so you'll just have to asettle for me
acting like an idiot here. look at my pix if they don't make u laugh
then u don't have a sense of humor! and if thats the case i know an
excellent doctor who can surgically implant one, he's done marvelous
work for some of my friends they all swear by him ! no really it's
true,!

lonelyteardrop's photo
Sat 12/16/06 04:57 AM
thank you all

no photo
Sat 12/16/06 10:59 AM
TEAR, I REALLY HOPE AND PRAY THAT YOU WILL SOMEDAY, BE ABLE
TO TURN ALL OF LIFE'S TEARS INTO 'SMILES'.. GOOD POEM....

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 11:03 AM
Lonelyteardrop...

take my hand,walk with me,talk with me...

keep your chin up girl...it'll be ok!!!

Good poem!