Topic: Unfolding Dreams
Gryphyn's photo
Fri 12/15/06 07:49 AM


Been left speechless.
Standing in awe.
Waiting for the time we finally speak.
Waiting her touch
Feeling her love surround me.

Engulfing me in ecstasy.
Engulfing me in passions.
Engulfing my every thought.
Engulfing my Soul.

As the words on the keyboards
Tap out, they come alive.
Seemingly a life their own.
Monitor fills with passions,
Releasing a continent away.
Hands are shaking.
Ears hearing a voice from far away,
Words heard in my mind.
Excitement my soul is beginning
Breaking apart the iceberg inside.
Feelings are lustful,
Not of lust.
Feeling of dreams unfolding
Not torn apart
Beginning excitement, no end.
Ending my search.

Have I told her of my visions.
Some general only.

Never did I tell her of a valley
Where no one sees.
Never of a valley
Where no on hears.
Never of the smile
I have seen.

Only of the love
I wish to find.
Only of the love
I wish to share.
Only of the Children
I wish to raise.

Never of the
Sights I have seen.

Something of
The man inside.

Never wanting
Things to hide.

Only to feel
Her gentle touch.
Only to hold
Her very much.

Life of my dreams.
Family of love.
Family of hope.
Family of my dreams.

Tears on this keyboard


DREAMS UNFOLDING

no photo
Fri 12/15/06 07:54 AM
I loved this poem/I am at a lost for words

beautiful Graphyn

no photo
Fri 12/15/06 07:59 AM
WOW!!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 12/15/06 08:54 AM
Very descriptive
and emotinal...
Loved it!


TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/15/06 09:22 AM
This is AWESOME Gryphyn, Humm am I right to assume
what I could be thinking? Smiles :)

iceprincess's photo
Fri 12/15/06 05:19 PM
awsome gryphen truly awsome!

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:42 PM
um,um,umhmmmmmmmmm...???

well dam...can't think of anything else to say here...

good one if you can get all of us near speechless!!!

stan4eVeR's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:48 PM
yeah what they all said can't add anything to the truth

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 12/15/06 10:07 PM
Thank you all, I did write this for someone and she has seen it. Not
telling who though.lol

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 12/17/06 01:47 AM
I stake my claim for all to see
UNFOLDING DREAMS belongs to me.


Thank You G.
I Loved it, and you know how much.