Topic: If you think my poem(s) suck...tell me please, thanks
44hello's photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:25 PM
If you read a poem of mine and it sucks, tell me...

I can handle your opinion without hating you too much!(only
kidding1!!!!)

maybe I'll see things in a different perspective and improve somehow.
Maybe I'll still suck too!
But at least I'll know I suck! I'd rather know I suck than think
that maybe I don't suck and they were so inncredibly moved by my
words that they were left speechless!

I swear, my computer will not beat up yours, if yours starts sending
negative vibes! I've got an older DELL laptop, with a fairly slow
processor, so it ain't about to make waves with yours!!!!

Some of you might get the impression that maybe I'm a little whacky or
strange by what I sometimes write, well, OK, maybe your right, but
that's not where I was heading....forget that!

I guess what I'm trying to spit out, is that if say 30 people have read
my poem, and no-one left a comment, I'm inclined to believe it was just
too good for words to express, or possibly,
it just plain old sucked !

Well, before I sign off here, I just wanted all of you to know how much
I love you and the fact that all of your poems are beautiful and I
wouldn't change a word or punctuation mark and hope you remember
this when you evaluate mine!!!

ONLY JOKING!!!! TELL ME IT SUCKS, IF YOU THINK THAT!

And just remember... I'll still love you just the same ,even after
you've ridiculed, emotionaly tortured , and scarred me for life!

michael1313's photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:32 PM
YOU SUCK!!!

just picking 44...lol...

lok...if a poem moves me in any way at all,
and I take time to comment...liked it ok?
some I wont,due to PERSONAL REASONS,
but if a poem is moving...good works!!!

no photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:46 PM
all poems are good because they are words spoken from the soul, some are
great!!

No I am sorry 44 I don't want your love I'm looking for a fe,ale ty

partyfag might hook ya up tho

no photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:46 PM
female

no photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:53 PM
GENERALLY 44 IF THEY LIKE YOUR WORDS THEY WILL POST TO IT
AND IF THEY DON'T THEN THEY DIDN'T LIKE IT.......

SOME CAN BE OVER LOOKED AND IF YOU POST TO MANY THEY WILL GET
POEM BURN OUT,,,,ABOUT THREE A DAY SPREAD OUT IN AROUND 2-3 HRS.

I HOPE THIS HELPS.........??

Cybear's photo
Thu 12/14/06 07:58 PM
Why in God's name would I tell you it sucks.You are already beating the
crap out of yoursrelf.Look at the last line,that has s-m written all
over it.(LOL)Your poems are good 44,keep up the good work.:)Peace!Cybear

44hello's photo
Thu 12/14/06 08:37 PM
MiikeM,
I caught your drift w/fe,ale! But I fancy women myself! Don't have
any prooblem w/someone being gay either, as lonng as their good people!

Iam4u,
You had to say it , didn't you! In other words, if 30 people read
and no-one commented, it must've REALLY sucked!

cybear, thanks, I beat myself up regularly though.... it's become a
habit!!!

Ontario's photo
Thu 12/14/06 08:41 PM
I,ve read most of the poems you posted....I would,nt say they
suck.....but simply not interesting.....!

mtironroses's photo
Thu 12/14/06 08:50 PM
when I read the poems, I am usually left speechless, because my words
can't come close to what you say....they are all very special.

44hello's photo
Thu 12/14/06 08:52 PM
TThanks Ontario, This is what I need! It tells me you can'tt
relate and I'm focusing tooo much on whatt I can relatte tto and not
enough on what someone witthout my experiences and/oor tthooughts on
specific tthings might be tthiinkiing. I have too sttep ouside my box,
and read itt to make sure it has relevence to others also! Thankyou!