Topic: If you think my poem(s) suck...tell me please, thanks | |
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If you read a poem of mine and it sucks, tell me...
I can handle your opinion without hating you too much!(only kidding1!!!!) maybe I'll see things in a different perspective and improve somehow. Maybe I'll still suck too! But at least I'll know I suck! I'd rather know I suck than think that maybe I don't suck and they were so inncredibly moved by my words that they were left speechless! I swear, my computer will not beat up yours, if yours starts sending negative vibes! I've got an older DELL laptop, with a fairly slow processor, so it ain't about to make waves with yours!!!! Some of you might get the impression that maybe I'm a little whacky or strange by what I sometimes write, well, OK, maybe your right, but that's not where I was heading....forget that! I guess what I'm trying to spit out, is that if say 30 people have read my poem, and no-one left a comment, I'm inclined to believe it was just too good for words to express, or possibly, it just plain old sucked ! Well, before I sign off here, I just wanted all of you to know how much I love you and the fact that all of your poems are beautiful and I wouldn't change a word or punctuation mark and hope you remember this when you evaluate mine!!! ONLY JOKING!!!! TELL ME IT SUCKS, IF YOU THINK THAT! And just remember... I'll still love you just the same ,even after you've ridiculed, emotionaly tortured , and scarred me for life! |
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YOU SUCK!!!
just picking 44...lol... lok...if a poem moves me in any way at all, and I take time to comment...liked it ok? some I wont,due to PERSONAL REASONS, but if a poem is moving...good works!!! |
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all poems are good because they are words spoken from the soul, some are
great!! No I am sorry 44 I don't want your love I'm looking for a fe,ale ty partyfag might hook ya up tho |
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GENERALLY 44 IF THEY LIKE YOUR WORDS THEY WILL POST TO IT
AND IF THEY DON'T THEN THEY DIDN'T LIKE IT....... SOME CAN BE OVER LOOKED AND IF YOU POST TO MANY THEY WILL GET POEM BURN OUT,,,,ABOUT THREE A DAY SPREAD OUT IN AROUND 2-3 HRS. I HOPE THIS HELPS.........?? |
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Why in God's name would I tell you it sucks.You are already beating the
crap out of yoursrelf.Look at the last line,that has s-m written all over it.(LOL)Your poems are good 44,keep up the good work.:)Peace!Cybear |
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MiikeM,
I caught your drift w/fe,ale! But I fancy women myself! Don't have any prooblem w/someone being gay either, as lonng as their good people! Iam4u, You had to say it , didn't you! In other words, if 30 people read and no-one commented, it must've REALLY sucked! cybear, thanks, I beat myself up regularly though.... it's become a habit!!! |
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I,ve read most of the poems you posted....I would,nt say they
suck.....but simply not interesting.....! |
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when I read the poems, I am usually left speechless, because my words
can't come close to what you say....they are all very special. |
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TThanks Ontario, This is what I need! It tells me you can'tt
relate and I'm focusing tooo much on whatt I can relatte tto and not enough on what someone witthout my experiences and/oor tthooughts on specific tthings might be tthiinkiing. I have too sttep ouside my box, and read itt to make sure it has relevence to others also! Thankyou! |
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