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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Mon 02/11/08 02:28 PM
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I want to know what you are thinking every time you look at me,
I want to know what you feel, to see if it’s the same I feel Close your eyes and touch me so you’ll see that I am the angel of your dreams The woman that could share your fantasies, a space in your existence Look at me, I breathe, I bleed, I am real… I long to feel the endless love that you have dreamed of I stand before you with nothing but this woman in front of you I own nothing, I have nothing, except for the need to be loved, to feel loved… I am closer than you think, just reach your hand and I’ll be there See me thru the looking glass of my soul and you’ll find me I’ve waited thru oceans of heartache for someone to love I’ve been cast away of loneliness and sorrow just waiting for a new horizon Waiting for someone to wake my heart from the deep sleep of uncertainty I am afraid to love you, I am afraid to admit these feelings that keep growing stronger I am afraid to love you, of hoping for a kiss, a sincere caress and receive nothing I am afraid to love you, afraid of showing all the love I could give and close my hands and hold nothing… But still I want to know, what do you feel about me… For my love H Marina. ![]() |
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very good
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Beautiful heart felt write!
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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Mon 02/11/08 02:32 PM
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Thank you all
![]() ![]() ![]() And so I will seek the truth within my heart to find maybe some day soon, that the only person I need to worry about hurting or making happy is my own self. Thanks again. ![]() |
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hi, first I've read your poetry. i really enjoyed it.
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Thanks Jimmy
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very nice girl very nice....
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Hmm....it seems that kc has already touched upon the same comment that I was gonna give.
Still, very nice write! very touching. ![]() ![]() |
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Thanks KC
![]() Fadedspirit thank you much. ![]() |
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