Topic: Dreaming
YourNameIsEverywhere's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:00 AM
All is haze and gray and mist.
Floating free, this body's separated state.
Seated swiftly in the never was
the might have been.

It overwhelms me,
these colors drift and time is split.
And each effect is all
I could have asked.

As each perfect moment follows next,
I cannot acquiesce.
I wonder, how could this,
ever truly be?

So I greet the dawn,
perfection flies,
and breathe a quit sigh,
For all that's haze and gray and mist.

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:03 AM
A wonderful write!

Welcome YNIE flowerforyou I look forward to reading more of you!

YourNameIsEverywhere's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:14 AM
Thanks ArtGurl.
happy

livelife68's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:17 AM
very nice and welcome

Sitngrin's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:19 AM
Welcome to the site! drinker

kc0003's photo
Mon 02/11/08 12:20 AM
nicely done

welcome to the site

drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 02/11/08 11:52 AM
flowerforyou Really nice... flowerforyou

YourNameIsEverywhere's photo
Mon 02/11/08 05:36 PM
I've really enjoyed reading what people write here, and thought I'd participate.

Thanks to everyone for the kind words, and the warm welcome.
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