Topic: Sounds of a shattered heart
greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:33 PM
The echoe fills the room as the lights go down
Silence is defening when it is shared alone.
Darkness is piercing my eyes.
It hurts not to see, floundering in the pitch black.
Even the rhythm of my heart seems unstable
in the lonliness I cant seem to wrap my head around.
No sweet hello when I come home, no hand to hold
while walking or watching a movie.
No sweet warmth as I lay me down to sleep. Sleep?
It evades me.
There are no passion filled arms to pull me near and steal my breath
away.
I wake up haggard and worn from a night of restlessness.
Longing to reach out to find my soulmate, my friend,
my resting place, yet again all I find is a void.
Who can muffle the sounds of a shattered heart?
I step thru the shards to try and find some shred of me
to put back together. But Im afraid I would'nt recognize
enough of me to know where to start.
An incomplete rendition with huge spaces remaining.
My feet bleed as I step on the broken pieces trying to find my way.
And breaking thru the silence is the tinkling of glass-
Sounds of a shattered heart.

no photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:43 PM
I wish that I was near so as to calm your fear,
I would hold you close and tight all through the night.
We could snuggle and talk until the mornings light........

Very good and missed words, I to feel the unpeace.

no photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:43 PM
Ahhh Green you've captured that feeling like no one else ever
has..powerful words...

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:50 PM
I have never heard a heart shatter as loud until I finished this
masterpiece.

G

greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:52 PM
Garsh- what a gals gotta go thru to get some attention around here!

LOL just kidding-thanks guys you rock!

greeneyedlady42's photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:53 PM
Guess Im not the only night owl tonight hunh?

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 12/13/06 11:55 PM
Nope it seems there are a few, nights seem longer than the day and yet
am unable to sleep but a few hrs.

no photo
Thu 12/14/06 12:01 AM
sleep..heh...bleh

stan4eVeR's photo
Thu 12/14/06 01:33 AM
greeneyedlady, a true work of art!

okieangel's photo
Thu 12/14/06 02:03 AM
great work... I could hear that heart all the way here in Oklahoma... oh
wait we share the sme broken heart its just you put it so beautiful..
realy good work..thank you for sharing

manome's photo
Thu 12/14/06 05:06 AM
Be thankful you could write about it so well,
brought a tear to my eye and a hold on my heart as well.
I can't pick your peices up and glue them back together,just ran out of
the stuff, been shattered myself.

michael1313's photo
Thu 12/14/06 05:15 AM
through the silence of the void,
of shattered hearts noise,
feel a catnap coming on,
sleep a restful sleep,
dreams of loving,
finding warmth beside you,
looking for love inside you,
even after mornings first kiss of light....M.

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/14/06 05:22 AM
That was Awesome girl !