Topic: Why She Left | |
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Desperately I search for ann answer,
posessing not, the worthiness of question. Reasons I'd failed. Her; wanting that only of love, I'd once given so freely, now, in days long past. Myself; taking for granted the core of her desires. Little signs I ignored like the subtle, yet powerful hints written on her face, which I was too blind to see. Time, with its eroding properties settled deep in her heart. Ability to mend, now far beyond limitations. As if only to torture myself, I ask again and again, the same question, with answer I still choose too ignore. Why has she left me? |
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hits home a lil too,,,good words of hope for forgivness deep within this
poem!!! good writing!!! |
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U NEED TO DO SOME SOUL SEARCHING
NORMALLY I WOULD SAY SOMETHING SMART ASS, BUT U DO NOT DESERVE THAT TREATMENT. HANG IN THERE ! |
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Thanks Michael....
Spay, believe me, I've done plenty of soul-searching! I wrote this a couple years ago but figured I'd post it for any input. And don't hold back, be a smart-ass, a critic, or whatever... I'm a big boy, I can take it! About the only thing that could make me flip-out these days is someone hurting my 6 yr. old daughter! |
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ACTUALLY I CANT BE A SMARTASS BECAUSE THAT WAS THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER
READ ON HEAR, MAINLKY BECAUSE IT HIT HOME. THANKS A BUNCH MAN. GOOD JOB. |
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the pleasure was mine 44...
always happy to read words of hope from broken hearts... let it heal over time,to love and trust another day! |
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MICHAEL, YOU APPEAR TO BE IN TOUCH WITH YOUR FEELINGS. THAT'S A GOOD
THING! THERE ARE NOT MANY PEOPLE WHO CHOOSE TO EXPRESS THEMSELVES EMOTIONALLY. POETRY IS OPEN TO ALL WHO WANT TO WRITE, BUT ALL ARE NOT AWARE OF THEIR INNER MOST SELVES, LIKE YOU. YOU WRITE DEEPLY! VERY GOOD! JUST ME, RENEE' |
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many thanx to you GreenEyes!
my poems do come right from my lonely heart! |
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SUPERB!!44hello.Keep up the good work.
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Muchos Gracious Cybear, but unfortunately to keep up the good work I
usually have to sacrifice being content with my life! |
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Well that is a very unfortunate catch 22 situation for sure.Because
seriously that is one fine piece of Poetry 44.I am sorry to hear that.Cybear |
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ANY DUDE THAT IS BIG ENOUGH TO EXPRESS THAT WHAT IS IN...
IS COOL IN MY BOOK.....GOOD WORDS TO THE GONE, BUT LIVES ON.. |
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