Topic: Why She Left
44hello's photo
Wed 12/13/06 02:12 PM
Desperately I search for ann answer,
posessing not,
the worthiness of question.

Reasons I'd failed.

Her;
wanting that only of love,
I'd once given so freely,
now, in days long past.

Myself;
taking for granted
the core of her desires.

Little signs I ignored
like the subtle,
yet powerful hints
written on her face,
which I was too blind to see.

Time, with its eroding properties
settled deep in her heart.

Ability to mend, now
far beyond limitations.

As if only to torture myself,
I ask again and again,
the same question,
with answer I still choose too ignore.

Why has she left me?

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/13/06 02:16 PM
hits home a lil too,,,good words of hope for forgivness deep within this
poem!!!

good writing!!!

spay's photo
Wed 12/13/06 02:17 PM
U NEED TO DO SOME SOUL SEARCHING

NORMALLY I WOULD SAY SOMETHING SMART ASS, BUT U DO NOT DESERVE THAT
TREATMENT.

HANG IN THERE !

44hello's photo
Wed 12/13/06 02:29 PM
Thanks Michael....

Spay, believe me, I've done plenty of soul-searching! I wrote this a
couple years ago but figured I'd post it for any input.

And don't hold back, be a smart-ass, a critic, or whatever... I'm a
big boy, I can take it! About the only thing that could make me
flip-out these days is someone hurting my 6 yr. old daughter!

spay's photo
Wed 12/13/06 02:50 PM
ACTUALLY I CANT BE A SMARTASS BECAUSE THAT WAS THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER
READ ON HEAR, MAINLKY BECAUSE IT HIT HOME. THANKS A BUNCH MAN. GOOD JOB.

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/13/06 03:00 PM
the pleasure was mine 44...
always happy to read words of hope from broken hearts...
let it heal over time,to love and trust another day!

no photo
Wed 12/13/06 03:18 PM
MICHAEL, YOU APPEAR TO BE IN TOUCH WITH YOUR FEELINGS. THAT'S A GOOD
THING! THERE ARE NOT MANY PEOPLE WHO CHOOSE TO EXPRESS THEMSELVES
EMOTIONALLY. POETRY IS OPEN TO ALL WHO WANT TO WRITE, BUT ALL ARE NOT
AWARE OF THEIR INNER MOST SELVES, LIKE YOU. YOU WRITE DEEPLY! VERY GOOD!
JUST ME, RENEE'

michael1313's photo
Wed 12/13/06 03:22 PM
many thanx to you GreenEyes!
my poems do come right from my lonely heart!

Cybear's photo
Wed 12/13/06 03:57 PM
SUPERB!!44hello.Keep up the good work.

44hello's photo
Wed 12/13/06 04:01 PM
Muchos Gracious Cybear, but unfortunately to keep up the good work I
usually have to sacrifice being content with my life!

Cybear's photo
Wed 12/13/06 04:06 PM
Well that is a very unfortunate catch 22 situation for sure.Because
seriously that is one fine piece of Poetry 44.I am sorry to hear
that.Cybear

no photo
Wed 12/13/06 04:12 PM
ANY DUDE THAT IS BIG ENOUGH TO EXPRESS THAT WHAT IS IN...

IS COOL IN MY BOOK.....GOOD WORDS TO THE GONE, BUT LIVES ON..