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Sitting here, gazing into space
my mind wandering in no special place coffee in one hand, smoke in the other constantly thinking, thoughts one after another life has brought me thus this far total illuminates all the scars walking from childhood, to manhood has been a long journey, to now single-hood sometimes happy, sometimes sad but some of the things have just, made me mad seen the horrors of the war, and the pain it brings from a peaceful man, to wedding rings once a father, and watching them grow now single, and having to let them go the Reaper took them as he appeared took them to a place most people fear now I sit here, alone in my world head is spinning, bent in a swirled wanted my life to be something but here I sit now with nothing. BOONEDOG |
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goodjob
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thanks mirror, its been in my head for years. I had noden help with it
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sad
but a nice expression of feelings |
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See, now that wasn't so bad
now the rest is up to you, I was glad to help, get you started... |
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aww
gives you a hug let it all out |
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hugs to you
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(((Boone)))
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thanks la,water msteddy
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I know it may not seem like it now, but things will get better..
It just takes time my friend.. |
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how sad but one many can relate to, love the honesty of the piece, the visuals it ispires, many of us have felt this
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thanks 2Btrue, just mary
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Great write boonedog! The explosion of feeling almost overwhelming with a glint of hope and inspiring message.
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thanks faded
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WOW....I almost forgot I did this.................
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Just remembering big stuff!!!
Hope you are well! |
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Sad yet beautifully expressed
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