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when she see the eyes of your soul,, she shall reach back,, and breath you in and peace,, calm,, home she will be Beautiful 
thank you mom being home would be nice 
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Awesome one loved it all I can say if one can not look within and see your soul they are not worth the time of day. 
awww thank you
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she’d be crazy not too kc bring her here we will show her…lol stef yeah just don't try to fix me up again....please! 
thank you stef
why? we know you now that was before d and i even met you
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thanks for stopping by s1ow |
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Another excellent write kc! with help from Noden too!
A song from the heart and a melody from soul. |
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Dragoness
faded thank you i always appreciate your words (I have rewritten this one about 5 times since I posted it... just can’t find the finished product) |
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(I have rewritten this one about 5 times since I posted it... just can’t find the finished product) Maybe it's not meant to have an end. Just a thought, but I have a few writes like that as well. (I've never posted them though) Another idea I have may be that it's one of those writes that tend to make progress as you make progress, sort of like an on going adventure. Just a few thoughts my friend, I hope I have helped if only just a bit. |
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(I have rewritten this one about 5 times since I posted it... just can’t find the finished product) Maybe it's not meant to have an end. Just a thought, but I have a few writes like that as well. (I've never posted them though) Another idea I have may be that it's one of those writes that tend to make progress as you make progress, sort of like an on going adventure. Just a few thoughts my friend, I hope I have helped if only just a bit. well i just think i stumbled at the end of it, i believe i have fixed the problem now so i can put it to rest. it bothers me when i get so close but, just cannot get it right thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts and yes it does help to listen to other peoples opinions. open minds see more in this world, thank you once more |
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another one that sings
email us the "finished" one kc we would like to see it D |
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it is on its way
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thanks kc
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That was just beautiful really liked it
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That was just beautiful really liked it
once again i thank you for your kindness
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it does flow better
thanks kc s |
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