Topic: Premonitions Rut
GCLIFE's photo
Fri 02/08/08 02:41 AM
PREMONITIONS RUT

I see the writing on the wall
It seems I often do
Catching fear in violent frame
My brain already knew

I see the writing on the wall
I pray my mind to sleep
I care not for these ending moments
My soul is tuned to reap

A crying victim shouting names
A saddened girl awakes
The misery of the lonely widow
The moneyless are at stake

A car turns over and rips in two
The storms steal all possession
A screaming mom can cry no more
A world in ethical recession

A once married soul awakes to blindness
Terminal pain sears through the gut
The failure of her life well done
Premonitions rut

For all these writings on the wall
I know not where’s the key
To console the sadness of tomorrow
And make the hurt go free

I must have asked to see the future
Where fate would answer to me
But god I know now not to sorrow
I ask you set me free

So when I see the writings now
The details shall escape me
For fate and fear go hand in hand
Tomorrow just let be




Noden's photo
Fri 02/08/08 04:33 AM
Nicely donesmokin smokin smokin

ChelleBelle's photo
Fri 02/08/08 04:41 AM
I love your writings Glen.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/08/08 08:24 AM
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Beautifully amazing is the writing sometimes flowerforyou

ellgee1976's photo
Fri 02/08/08 06:19 PM
you rawk G...awesome

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/08/08 06:30 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

browneyes_46's photo
Fri 02/08/08 07:43 PM
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Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 02/09/08 05:57 AM
Excellent write GCLIFE! :smile:

Something to attain and see, something to think about, and the wisdom relayed, let tomorrow be.

GCLIFE's photo
Sun 02/10/08 10:19 AM
well said Faded...thank you

and thank you all for your kind support flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/10/08 02:29 PM
You're very welcome GCLIFE. Your writing often forces me to look inward and see some of the thoughts or emotions that I have chosen to neglect along life's path at one point or other.