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Topic: Would it matter..
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Thu 02/07/08 06:27 PM
would it matter if I disappered, would it matter if I lost my way, would it matter if my pressence was to fade, would it matter if I lost a limb, would it matter that I spoke and you never listened, would it matter if I lost my voice, would it matter if I took my life.... or would it only matter after I was done after the life in my eyes have finally seaped, after you watched yet didnt know, aftef the little I always held so tight became loose, after I asked and all I heard was no... Matter..it doesnt anymore

openheart45 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 724	Thu 02/07/08 06:29 PM
so sad...but nice

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Thu 02/07/08 06:29 PM
yes it does...very much

MuSic_is_life08 Joined Thu 02/07/08 Posts: 1	Thu 02/07/08 06:33 PM
Wow that is amazing....it really shows a lot of emotion... glad to meet someone else that appreciates poetry....maybe we can talk about it sometime....Cati

SonOfJack Joined Wed 02/06/08 Posts: 97	Thu 02/07/08 06:34 PM
thats cool brother, get your feelings out, poem was cool as hell, but sadly when you die it doesnt matter.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 02/07/08 06:35 PM
Yes it matters.....

ADiamond Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 2375	Thu 02/07/08 06:37 PM
That was so very beautiful.......

crackerjack123 Joined Thu 01/24/08 Posts: 475	Thu 02/07/08 06:40 PM
very nice compilation, thanks for sharing it

Kenny2004 Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 100	Thu 02/07/08 06:40 PM
would it matter if I disappered, would it matter if I lost my way, would it matter if my pressence was to fade, would it matter if I lost a limb, would it matter that I spoke and you never listened, would it matter if I lost my voice, would it matter if I took my life.... or would it only matter after I was done after the life in my eyes have finally seaped, after you watched yet didnt know, aftef the little I always held so tight became loose, after I asked and all I heard was no... Matter..it doesnt anymore

Kenny2004 Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 100	Thu 02/07/08 06:44 PM
would it matter if I disappered, would it matter if I lost my way, would it matter if my pressence was to fade, would it matter if I lost a limb, would it matter that I spoke and you never listened, would it matter if I lost my voice, would it matter if I took my life.... or would it only matter after I was done after the life in my eyes have finally seaped, after you watched yet didnt know, aftef the little I always held so tight became loose, after I asked and all I heard was no... Matter..it doesnt anymore Hey all is good in what you make of your time in this world you just have to face all your fears and troubles and attact all that gets in your way

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 02/07/08 06:46 PM


DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Thu 02/07/08 06:47 PM
Thanx for the comment everyone ^^ This write isnt one thats completly personal, Its mostly a Thought Experessed There is a little of mein every write I do, but its not always all me

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