oK EVERYONE i NEED SOME FEED BACK ON THIS ONE...My friend has asked me to write a poem for her true love and I need toknow what is missing or if it is good enough to give it to her to give to her man.....

As I wake up to the bright sun shining through
my window,I think of you shining down on me.As
I lay in bed waiting for your early morning call,
I feel warm and fuzzy way deep down in my soul.For
it is you that gets me through my day.Just hearing
your voice each and every day.I now have a special
reason to live out a bright and sunny day.If it wasn't
for you that came into my life it would be nothing but,
a short,dull and boring day each and every day.Even when
the sky is cloudy and grey.My love doesn't even compare
to the way you love me each and every day.My heart skips
a beat when I hear your voice on the line.It also sends
shivers up and down my spine.That is why I pray each and
every night and thank the lord for bringing you into my
life!!!

Its really good, but i have one critism if i may....you've used the word "day" exessivly....if maybe you could find another to replace a few of them it would be awsome.

it was me its my fault

nope that is what i wanted is input....so I volunteer you to help[ me fix it up then e-mail me where you think some words would go in to knock the day's out please if you would?

thats SUPER sweet, i LOVE it.