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Topic: Tenderly
MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Wed 02/06/08 04:07 PM
Tender was your touch; a warm fusion of body and soul ... Tender was your soft voice whispering in an ear eager to hear your soft spoken words of love ... Tender was the beat of your heart against mine; a rhythm strong and sweetly sublime ... Tender was the way we grew together hesitatingly eager with anticipation ... Tender was the way we were lost and found in each other ... and Tender was the way you said goodbye regretfully and quietly; one crystalline tear in your eye ... Tenderly is the way I put your memory to rest blanketed in love and regret ... ... goodbye ...

misty_57 Joined Sat 12/01/07 Posts: 1618	Wed 02/06/08 04:09 PM
Beautifully wrote

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 02/06/08 04:10 PM
thats beautiful,just like you MsWizard

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Wed 02/06/08 04:11 PM
Beautifully wrote Thank you Misty~

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Wed 02/06/08 04:11 PM
thats beautiful,just like you MsWizard Awww Thank you Mirror!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/06/08 05:40 PM


songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Wed 02/06/08 07:09 PM
Tugged at my heart strings.. very nice

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Wed 02/06/08 07:14 PM
Tugged at my heart strings.. very nice Thank you Song!!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Thu 02/07/08 05:07 AM
YES, DO THINGS TENDERLY Tender was your touch; a warm fusion of body and soul ... Tender was your soft voice whispering in an ear eager to hear your soft spoken words of love ... Tender was the beat of your heart against mine; a rhythm strong and sweetly sublime ... Tender was the way we grew together hesitatingly eager with anticipation ... Tender was the way we were lost and found in each other ... and Tender was the way you said goodbye regretfully and quietly; one crystalline tear in your eye ... Tenderly is the way I put your memory to rest blanketed in love and regret ... ... goodbye ...

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Thu 02/07/08 05:23 AM
A sweet tender goodbye, MsWizard you do write beautiful poetry, I enjoyed reading your poem, I have to admit it's the first one I've read but not the last now....thanks for this sharing part of yourself...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 02/07/08 09:08 AM
A sweet tender goodbye, MsWizard you do write beautiful poetry, I enjoyed reading your poem, I have to admit it's the first one I've read but not the last now....thanks for this sharing part of yourself... Thank you Noden....that's a lovely thing to say....

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 02/07/08 09:16 AM
I had to give this one a moment of silence. Excellent and heartfelt to the core.....

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 02/07/08 09:24 AM
I had to give this one a moment of silence. Excellent and heartfelt to the core..... Thank you Fadedspirit...that was truly a wonderful thing to say~

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 02/07/08 02:36 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 02/08/08 05:55 PM
((TEDDY))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 02/08/08 06:06 PM
guess i missed this one... really nice tender hearts cheer for you on this one

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 02/08/08 06:20 PM
guess i missed this one... really nice tender hearts cheer for you on this one ((((KC)))))) thank you~