Topic: the weather
jimz's photo
Thu 01/31/08 02:02 PM
off me
rolling
thunder
all my
anger
I've yet
to conquer

all the rain
falling
but there
is no drain
it builds up
a solitary dam
all
my sadness
so full

all
the
hail
pounding
my brain
hitting
spots
that
make
me
bleed

the snow
covers
my eyes
when
it
falls
the
coldness
makes
me see
the
outside
as my
enemy

earthquakes
shake
my soul

tornadoes
stretch
their
cyclone
wind
through
my being

but
the
worse
are
the
clear
skies
where
I see
myself



klugman's photo
Thu 01/31/08 02:18 PM
The calm is where you repair the damage done...:wink:

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/31/08 03:58 PM
introspective thinking is a must but it can be hard to deal with

i like your writes thought i do not always comment on them
keep them coming


drinker

jimz's photo
Thu 01/31/08 04:58 PM
"kc003", thank you, I've seen your name and replies, great sentence on introspection, awesome!
peace out
jimmy


pkh's photo
Thu 01/31/08 05:05 PM
Jimflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 01/31/08 08:34 PM
((((( Jimmy ))))

Within the calm breath and rest a bit,, release and set free

Hugs to you
flowerforyou :heart: