Topic: Something to give
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:05 PM
Something Left To Give

There's nothing left to give
For I've emptied out my strife
Crumbled the confusion
Wasting deep inside my mind.
I've packed up all the love
And bundled it with care
Placing it so neatly
underneath my dare.
I shewed away the demons
That haunted me within
I blocked the well of hope
So no one could drink it in.
Now I sit here blank
without my hope and dare
Staring at a wall
Without a want or care
I caught a tear that happened
To be running down my face
I looked but then I realized
There was no more space
A lesson there is learned
For those who pack away
All those felt emotions
You'll unpack one day.
Life is never easy
And love is never cheap
The YOU that hides within
Is never hidden deep.

Fadedspirit 1/29/2008

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:08 PM
Another good write... flowerforyou

creativesoul's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:10 PM
Excellent... flowerforyou

Process, my friend... process...

Tears wash the spirit...

Keep your head up, and your focus on that which brings joy and hope... away from that which has not...

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:12 PM
That was good spirit...I would post something here to help out but it is way too long....I think it would be helpful to all when it comes time for a loss.

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:33 PM
very nice faded

words of truth
when searching for ones’ self we sometimes look too deep

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 01/30/08 07:34 AM
very nice faded even when we think there is no more there always is it is just hidden deep within.flowerforyou

klugman's photo
Wed 01/30/08 07:43 AM
It will get better...flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 01/31/08 06:55 AM
Thanks MsTeddyBear and creativesoul!

Thanks Robert, most tend to forget who they are when they go into hiding.

Thanks kc, much appreciated!

TxsGal, very true. OUr stories just get better the deeper we dig.

Thanks klugman!

otterman's photo
Thu 01/31/08 07:27 AM
so true another good one thanx for sharingdrinker

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 05:45 AM
No problem otterman and thanks for the comments!