Topic: On the Beach | |
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On the Beach
The night sky is filled and overflowing With the stars so brightly shining The moon is reflecting shadows of light The waves are lapping up onto the sand As we walk along hand in hand We walk along the beach To find a secluded spot So we can lay our blanket down And there in each others arms We begin to become one The privacy that we have Allows us to share our love As we caress each other We slowly begin to undress Taking our time The anticipation is building Knowing that soon we will be one Fingers and hands exploring Skin touching skin You slowly enter me Taking your time Allowing the pleasure to build For we have no desire to hasten our desire For we want to take out time on this blanket we laid down Giving to each other the greatest gift Gazing in each others eyes Our hearts, souls, and body entwined Wrapping each other in security We laid out blanket down Snuggled in each others arms We lay quietly Content and happy to be together Watching the stars begin to fade As the moon says its time to start another day Its time to dress And fold up the blanket Until another day When once again We will be back to lay our blanket down PMS 01/29/08 |
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wow thats beautiful
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Beautiful!!!!
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Very nice....now where's my block of ice? lol
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Its bad enough the adds throw sex at us-
now your doing it too??? Good write (((snuggles!))) |
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Thank you Chrissy, WildSide and FadedSpirit
(((MSTEDDY)))) glad to see you on here more, hope all is going well with you. Hmmmmmm for some reason the writing mood has hit me again, maybe my wintertime blues are finally leaving |
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That was magnifico.........I didn't know you wrote so beautifully Pam......Going to have to check out some more of you work....Heart ya
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Thank you (((((DEB))))
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You've been on a writing frenzy like me here lately. I like this one.
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Awesome another good one.
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softly said
nice write |
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Pam that was AWESOME!!!!
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((((WOLFEYES)))))yes been writing a bit more, these I chose to show, some I keep to myself
(((((((KRISTI))))) Thank you Thank you kc I read some of your poems on your homepage, beautiful writes (((((RUTHIE)))))) my sis Thank you |
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Wow!! feel the sand between my toes...
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((((( Snuggles )))))
Breath taking |
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Is it summer already? Snuggles you make the place hot, hot, hot !!! Nice write
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Thank you (((((SONGSTRESS, LAMOM, and BONNY)))))))
I am so wishing it was summer |
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