Topic: Simplicity.
LauraLynn08's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:49 AM
wool i'm just a person
you see, with feelings that
can be hurt, and i'm not in
this life to hurt no
body, I know you think
i'm some kind of
monster see, but alls I wanna
do is live my life peaceful
like. I wanna have some
friends that will
overlook the things about me
that aren't important to them
but are important to some
people, I'm a simple
woman, who likes
simple things see, and that
ain't no reason to go and
tear down this
simple girl.

recentfree's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:52 AM
who would do that to you, tell me I ,ll beat them up!!!

LauraLynn08's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:53 AM

who would do that to you, tell me I ,ll beat them up!!!


oh no one it's just a poem.

monsta1187's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:54 AM
oh yeah u sure? he'll beat him up i got both of your backs!!

LauraLynn08's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:57 AM

oh yeah u sure? he'll beat him up i got both of your backs!!


no there is no need for violence here.

Lily0923's photo
Mon 01/28/08 01:15 PM
I'm a horrible speller, but the sentence structure is well, you know, unless it was meant to be that way and I am missing something in the poem.

LauraLynn08's photo
Mon 01/28/08 02:07 PM

I'm a horrible speller, but the sentence structure is well, you know, unless it was meant to be that way and I am missing something in the poem.


It was meant to be that way.