Topic: My vow to you | |
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My vow to you"
When you are sad, I will dry your tears When you are scared, I will comfort your fears When you need love, my heart I will share When you are sick, for you I will care You will feel my love when we are apart Knowing that nothing will change my heart When you are worried, I will give you hope When you are confused, I will help you cope When you are lost, and can’t see the light My love will be a beacon, shining ever so bright This is my vow, one that I pledge till the end For you above all are my partner and best friend These words I have written, speak of my love for you From my lips these words spoken, shall always ring true God has blessed me, and with your hand in mine Both of our hearts, will forever intertwine |
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beautifully written
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THIS GUY IS GOOD OR HE'S JUST FULL OF IT I THINK FULL OF IT..LOL..
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excuse me? I've posted my poems in my aol profile.okayyyyyyyy! I won't
share any more poems with this assinine website. You don't even know me dude to start with that shit. |
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oh by the way. the dog is better looking than you lol
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there will always be critics giving you a hard time. dont let them get
to you. at least bogie was nicer than spay would have been. and spay is always in here giving the other poets/writers an extremely hard time. i liked your poem a lot. made me think alot and wish i could have something like that in my life. thank you for sharing your poetry. |
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IF YOU LIKED ME BETTER THEN THE DOG I WOULD SAY THAT YOUR A FUCKIN
FAGGET,BUT THE DOG DOES LOOK GOOD DONT HE |
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It was Awesome poem guy don't let him get too ya he has a name like
bogie come on what could he actually know about poems. |
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I DONT KNOW ONE DAM THING ABOUT THEN SO I'M JUST TALKING OUT MY ASS
DUDE,SO YOU KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. IF I HURT YOUR FEELING IT WILL BE OK TOMORROW |
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Go fuck yourself dude, apparently your too stupid to understand being
put down. An female friend of mine told me about this site so, wanted to join but, unless this site cleans out the dirtbags, it won't amount to anything. I'm gone! |
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YOUR WORDS WERE TRULLY DEEP, AND I LIKED IT ALOT!!!
TWO THINGS, DON'T JUST STOP BECAUSE SOMEONE IS SHITTY!! AND BE CAREFUL SHOWING YOUR HEART, MOST WILL TRY TO MAKE YOU OUT TO BE OBSESSED WITH SOMEONE, LOL. |
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Thought this was a cool site but, I'm gone, thanks all anyway for the
nice words. Dude, you spelled faggot wrong, I suggest higher learning education. GoodBye |
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don't let people let that get you down man. Just cause 1 or 2 of them
are ass's doesn't mean this is a bad site. Good poem by the way |
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I TOLD YOU IT WILL BE OK TOMORROW DUDE.SORRY IF I PISSED IN YOUR
WEEDS.NO I'M NOT.SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DONT MINE ME.LISTEN TO THEM OTHER GUYS THEY NO GOOD SHIT FROM BAD SHIT I DONT.SO I'M SORRY DUDE |
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at least you confessed bogie. now play nice with the newbies.
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This is what I,m talking about....great stuff dude...!
Sapplings take notice.....! |
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I'LL BE NICE ,SORRY DO YOU WANT ME TO GET DOWN ON MY KNEES FOR YOU,DONT
THINKS YOU GOT TO LOVE THE NAME BOGIE BOGART |
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no. not the first time anyways...
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HAY DUDE CAN YOU EVER FOR GIVE ME I'M JUST BEING MY SELF HERE I WAS TOLD
YOU COULD DO THAT. |
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HEY WHATS GOING ON IN HERE ? OH YA SPAY IS IN THE HOUSE
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