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Topic: My vow to you
CuteSubmissiveGuy's photo
Wed 12/06/06 04:49 PM
My vow to you"

When you are sad, I will dry your tears
When you are scared, I will comfort your fears
When you need love, my heart I will share
When you are sick, for you I will care

You will feel my love when we are apart
Knowing that nothing will change my heart
When you are worried, I will give you hope
When you are confused, I will help you cope

When you are lost, and can’t see the light
My love will be a beacon, shining ever so bright
This is my vow, one that I pledge till the end
For you above all are my partner and best friend

These words I have written, speak of my love for you
From my lips these words spoken, shall always ring true
God has blessed me, and with your hand in mine
Both of our hearts, will forever intertwine

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Wed 12/06/06 04:54 PM
beautifully written

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 04:54 PM
THIS GUY IS GOOD OR HE'S JUST FULL OF IT I THINK FULL OF IT..LOL..

CuteSubmissiveGuy's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:01 PM
excuse me? I've posted my poems in my aol profile.okayyyyyyyy! I won't
share any more poems with this assinine website.

You don't even know me dude to start with that shit.

CuteSubmissiveGuy's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:02 PM
oh by the way. the dog is better looking than you lol

no photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:03 PM
there will always be critics giving you a hard time. dont let them get
to you.
at least bogie was nicer than spay would have been. and spay is always
in here giving the other poets/writers an extremely hard time.
i liked your poem a lot.
made me think alot and wish i could have something like that in my life.
thank you for sharing your poetry.

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:05 PM
IF YOU LIKED ME BETTER THEN THE DOG I WOULD SAY THAT YOUR A FUCKIN
FAGGET,BUT THE DOG DOES LOOK GOOD DONT HE

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:05 PM
It was Awesome poem guy don't let him get too ya he has a name like
bogie come on what could he actually know about poems.

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:10 PM
I DONT KNOW ONE DAM THING ABOUT THEN SO I'M JUST TALKING OUT MY ASS
DUDE,SO YOU KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. IF I HURT YOUR FEELING IT WILL BE OK
TOMORROW

CuteSubmissiveGuy's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:11 PM
Go fuck yourself dude, apparently your too stupid to understand being
put down. An female friend of mine told me about this site so, wanted to
join but, unless this site cleans out the dirtbags, it won't amount to
anything.

I'm gone!

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Wed 12/06/06 05:12 PM
YOUR WORDS WERE TRULLY DEEP, AND I LIKED IT ALOT!!!

TWO THINGS, DON'T JUST STOP BECAUSE SOMEONE IS SHITTY!!

AND BE CAREFUL SHOWING YOUR HEART, MOST WILL TRY TO MAKE YOU
OUT TO BE OBSESSED WITH SOMEONE, LOL.

CuteSubmissiveGuy's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:13 PM
Thought this was a cool site but, I'm gone, thanks all anyway for the
nice words.

Dude, you spelled faggot wrong, I suggest higher learning education.

GoodBye

damagedheart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:15 PM
don't let people let that get you down man. Just cause 1 or 2 of them
are ass's doesn't mean this is a bad site. Good poem by the way

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:16 PM
I TOLD YOU IT WILL BE OK TOMORROW DUDE.SORRY IF I PISSED IN YOUR
WEEDS.NO I'M NOT.SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DONT MINE ME.LISTEN TO THEM
OTHER GUYS THEY NO GOOD SHIT FROM BAD SHIT I DONT.SO I'M SORRY DUDE

no photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:17 PM
at least you confessed bogie. now play nice with the newbies.

Ontario's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:18 PM
This is what I,m talking about....great stuff dude...!
Sapplings take notice.....!

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:22 PM
I'LL BE NICE ,SORRY DO YOU WANT ME TO GET DOWN ON MY KNEES FOR YOU,DONT
THINKS

YOU GOT TO LOVE THE NAME BOGIE BOGART

no photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:22 PM
no. not the first time anyways...

bogie's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:24 PM
HAY DUDE CAN YOU EVER FOR GIVE ME I'M JUST BEING MY SELF HERE I WAS TOLD
YOU COULD DO THAT.

spay's photo
Wed 12/06/06 05:25 PM
HEY WHATS GOING ON IN HERE ? OH YA SPAY IS IN THE HOUSE

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