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Topic: Sand
klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Sat 01/26/08 07:48 PM
Washed up on the shore of some distant universe Speck of sand lost among the trillions Like so many others, yet different Out of breath, out of time Lonely amongst the throngs Yet we saw each other Wanting me out of the many You have entered my heart Please take me now Before I am washed Back out to sea... DB 1/26/2008

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 01/26/08 07:53 PM
Very nice! Good description of ones self! I have felt like a speck of sand myself so many times!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Sat 01/26/08 07:55 PM
Awesome very good Dan!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 01/26/08 07:57 PM
That was really good there Klug....good description.

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Sat 01/26/08 08:03 PM
Thanks yall, I really appreciate it.

misty_57 Joined Sat 12/01/07 Posts: 1618	Sat 01/26/08 08:05 PM
Nice

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 01/27/08 12:19 AM


Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sun 01/27/08 06:41 AM
Its nice your speck of sand had a twinkle set in someone's eyes, very nice poem, Klug

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Sun 01/27/08 11:11 AM
Ah man, way to put it in a poem, the many, the few, then love, between two. Great work! peace out jimmy

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Sun 01/27/08 03:39 PM
Thanks everybody...she really brings out the best in me...my little spec of sand...

creativesoul Joined Mon 04/16/07 Posts: 9166	Sun 01/27/08 03:41 PM

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