Topic: A Women's Eye's
damagedheart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 03:56 PM
If you look deep into the core,
you'll see so much more,
there's nothing to hide,
but oh so much to share.
Like a pearl all we need,
is for you to be gentle and care,
It's not a game,
It's a matter of consistantey and sinceraty.
If only you took the time to look into the eyes,
you would see the truth and angsiaty of a heart that is tired,
that wish's that you would atleast try,
or your romance will surely die.
Nothing in the world does a women want more,
then for a man to look into her eye's,
and realize there's no reason to hide.

Stacie

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Wed 12/06/06 04:08 PM
stacie the eyes tell all great poem

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/06/06 04:31 PM
As they say the eyes are the windows to ones soul!!

damagedheart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 04:32 PM
very trur and they are.

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Wed 12/06/06 10:47 PM
SURE R PRETTY!

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 12/06/06 11:32 PM
And the smile is the light that shines the way.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 12/07/06 09:29 AM
Take the time and you will see
the smile on my face for all to glee
Comes from deep within
happiness overflowing
The soul is seen through the eyes
it's true
and even better when You can be
the one I smile for
the one I yearn for
and know
You
are the one that can make me a we
and forevermore smile with me,
please, wherever you are, come and complet me...

SCG

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Thu 12/07/06 11:27 AM
that is a beautiful poem luv it

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Thu 12/07/06 11:41 AM
An amazing poem..beautifully written
thank you for inspiring us to express ourselves through poetry

JT

damagedheart's photo
Thu 12/07/06 02:15 PM
thanks for the compliment really means alot.