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Topic: beat beat
randy444 Joined Mon 10/09/06 Posts: 390	Wed 12/06/06 08:56 AM
Every time we embrace, I go to that far away place When we just walk hand in hand. I’m in never, never land. Whenever I look into your eyes, I begin to get butterflies, Then my heart skips a beat, And our lips passionately meet. You are always on my mind, Your face is all it can find. I think about you every day And know it’ll work out somehow, some way. Some say we’re dumb and foolish Some say we should do as we wish But all my heart could ever do Is tell you that I could always want you

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76455	Wed 12/06/06 09:18 AM
Ewwww very sweet one some lucky one has your heart in this one. :) Go for what every makes you happy!

Addy23 Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 95	Wed 12/06/06 10:19 AM
awwh thats good

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 12/06/06 10:44 AM
hmmmmmm...not bad for a CITY BOY...lol keep it up dude it rocks...th BABES WILL LIKE THIS ONE TOO...M.

damagedheart Joined Mon 12/04/06 Posts: 70	Wed 12/06/06 01:18 PM
Awww soo very sweet. How ever you wrote this for is or was lucky.

bright_happy_honest Joined Thu 11/30/06 Posts: 130	Wed 12/06/06 05:15 PM
WOW...that one left me speechless... :)

randy444 Joined Mon 10/09/06 Posts: 390	Fri 12/08/06 07:12 PM
wow your comments left me speachless

bright_happy_honest Joined Thu 11/30/06 Posts: 130	Sat 12/09/06 07:48 AM
... :)

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