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Topic: Why
damagedheart's photo
Tue 12/05/06 06:37 PM
After all the times you hurt me,
the times you made me cry,
why do I forgive you with every little sigh?
The times that you betrayed me,
and the times of painful goodbyes..
Why do I need you,
after all the lies?
The times that you ignored me,
and the times my pain has shown,
why do I still care for you,
though you left me here all alone.
With the scars you left upon me,
and the tears that fall each day..
Why am I in love with you,
though you've treated me this way?

no photo
Tue 12/05/06 07:34 PM
i love your poem....
i'm sorry to hear that you have a broken heart,i do too.

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 12/05/06 08:02 PM
If only there was a way to take the pain away.

damagedheart's photo
Tue 12/05/06 08:06 PM
Well thanks, i figure that every broken heart makes us appriciate love
that much more when we do have it. So lets all keep out heads up.

no photo
Wed 12/06/06 07:55 AM
you need to get rid of that guy if he treated you that bad

damagedheart's photo
Wed 12/06/06 01:25 PM
I did I left him far behind but not before i suffered first.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 12/07/06 09:45 AM
Your love for me has waned
the time to end it
has been tamed
no more pain,
no more sorrow,
just good bye and no more tomorrows
waking up alone and angry
hapiness now dwells within
'cause I know I'm stronger now
than I've ever been
Without you here
I can just be ME
don't have to pretend anymore
to please and please and please
You never appreciated,
Just were ungtrateful,
You will never find another,
that was as faithful
Thank You for the lessons
I've taken them to heart
and have found out
I can fly and create my own art
Thank You dear for taking part...

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Thu 12/07/06 09:46 AM
Stacie,
I can definetely identify...
keep up the great poems...
they are heart wrenching
and wonderful!

SCG

no photo
Thu 12/07/06 10:00 AM
your poem was wonderfully written, it makes me reflect, and your right,
hold your head up.

jerbear1966's photo
Thu 12/07/06 10:02 AM
Very touching... i think you deserve better.

no photo
Thu 12/07/06 10:28 AM
I can also relate to this poem. My ex was very abusive to me both
mentally and physically and yet I loved him unconditionally. I have
learned over the years that it actually had more to do with the person
that I was as to why I could not let go and I began to work on myself.
It has taken many years but I am a better and stronger person
today...thank you for sharing that.

sphere's photo
Thu 12/07/06 10:42 AM
very good heart felt..........

damagedheart's photo
Thu 12/07/06 11:01 AM
thank you are for your kind words.

no photo
Thu 12/07/06 11:25 AM
nice poem its just to bad you had to live it to feel the pain you
deserve the best

BlackWidow8511's photo
Mon 12/11/06 09:44 AM

Time goes by so quick
You always respond too late
You hate to wait
You always take the bait
You always hesitate
By the time you make up your mind its too late to make things right
Thats why your eyes are never bright
You never seem to do whats right
Your heart is very sore
You can't seem to take anymore
Your senses are very dull
All you seem to have is a hull
Your heart is now frozen
Because you have not chozen
You seem to feel pain
Only in Vain
did you ever feel me beside you holding you tight
Did I not do things right
I'm not that bright Alright
All I want is you holding me tight at night
I needed to hear your voice
But that was your choice
To leave everything behind
Leaving me out of my mind
Whats Wrong?????

damagedheart's photo
Mon 12/11/06 11:15 AM
that was great blackwidow..

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 12/13/06 09:37 AM
Thanx

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/13/06 09:49 AM
Both are very good indeed!

damagedheart's photo
Thu 12/14/06 04:53 PM
thanks everyone

BillRoot's photo
Thu 12/14/06 04:58 PM
could feel that!! very well done! tobad we have to go through so much
hurt to find the right direction sometimes.keep on keepin on!

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