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After all the times you hurt me,
the times you made me cry, why do I forgive you with every little sigh? The times that you betrayed me, and the times of painful goodbyes.. Why do I need you, after all the lies? The times that you ignored me, and the times my pain has shown, why do I still care for you, though you left me here all alone. With the scars you left upon me, and the tears that fall each day.. Why am I in love with you, though you've treated me this way? |
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i love your poem....
i'm sorry to hear that you have a broken heart,i do too. |
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If only there was a way to take the pain away.
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Well thanks, i figure that every broken heart makes us appriciate love
that much more when we do have it. So lets all keep out heads up. |
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you need to get rid of that guy if he treated you that bad
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I did I left him far behind but not before i suffered first.
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Your love for me has waned
the time to end it has been tamed no more pain, no more sorrow, just good bye and no more tomorrows waking up alone and angry hapiness now dwells within 'cause I know I'm stronger now than I've ever been Without you here I can just be ME don't have to pretend anymore to please and please and please You never appreciated, Just were ungtrateful, You will never find another, that was as faithful Thank You for the lessons I've taken them to heart and have found out I can fly and create my own art Thank You dear for taking part... |
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Stacie,
I can definetely identify... keep up the great poems... they are heart wrenching and wonderful! SCG |
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your poem was wonderfully written, it makes me reflect, and your right,
hold your head up. |
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Very touching... i think you deserve better.
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I can also relate to this poem. My ex was very abusive to me both
mentally and physically and yet I loved him unconditionally. I have learned over the years that it actually had more to do with the person that I was as to why I could not let go and I began to work on myself. It has taken many years but I am a better and stronger person today...thank you for sharing that. |
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very good heart felt..........
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thank you are for your kind words.
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nice poem its just to bad you had to live it to feel the pain you
deserve the best |
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Time goes by so quick You always respond too late You hate to wait You always take the bait You always hesitate By the time you make up your mind its too late to make things right Thats why your eyes are never bright You never seem to do whats right Your heart is very sore You can't seem to take anymore Your senses are very dull All you seem to have is a hull Your heart is now frozen Because you have not chozen You seem to feel pain Only in Vain did you ever feel me beside you holding you tight Did I not do things right I'm not that bright Alright All I want is you holding me tight at night I needed to hear your voice But that was your choice To leave everything behind Leaving me out of my mind Whats Wrong????? |
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that was great blackwidow..
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Thanx
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Both are very good indeed!
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thanks everyone
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could feel that!! very well done! tobad we have to go through so much
hurt to find the right direction sometimes.keep on keepin on! |
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