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Topic: ♥ ~ ♥ Unredeemed ♥ ~ ♥
BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/22/08 07:55 PM
Edited by BonnyMiss on Tue 01/22/08 07:56 PM
In the still night she dreams
Of love, yet unredeemed
As she laid upon her bed
Insane thoughts filled her head
Her eyes flickered in restless sleep
he was her hero, hers to keep
With every breath she drew him nearer
He was a picture,she knew no fairer
He stood above her and with a look
Melted her heart strings like a running brook
His lips bore down upon her flesh
Oh anguished soul you know not rest
His red hot kisses sealed her fate
Turning her into quivering flakes
Agonised cries escaped her lips
When his hands drew across her hips
Exploring her entire anatomy
He wanted all of her you see
Every crevice he explored
"Take me,I'm yours" she implored
Gone was his inner forboding
And carried out further exploring
His fingers did the tweaking
whilst his lips gaily did the seeking
In a frenzy he did reach
And found her ripened peach
He bit into that forbidden fruit
And played upon it like a flute
Sweet music he did play without fear
which to her eye brought a tear
He laid himself laid upon her chest
When finally a chance to rest
The agony when he did depart
at dawn she awoke with a broken heart
Her love remained unredeemed
For all that she had was a dream



♥ ~ ♥ BonnyMiss 23.01.08 ♥ ~ ♥


















openheart45's photo
Tue 01/22/08 07:58 PM
very nice:smile:

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:05 PM
a dream!!!!
i was waiting for more
and sadly you woke her

nicely written


flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:11 PM
Thank you openheart
kc.........................that's all I'm saying bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:29 PM
(((( Ms Bonny ))))

Close your eyes and dream,, I shall await part two,,

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My sense's are alive,,,

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm me like :heart: flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:33 PM
Hello Mom, I'm glad you like bigsmile I think I let my imagination run away with me blushing How are you sweetie, how's life/love and the universe?

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:36 PM
Marjorie, the heat is on and the fans are going full blast...if there is a part two...I'm calling the fire department.

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:37 PM
Edited by LAMom on Tue 01/22/08 08:37 PM

Hello Mom, I'm glad you like bigsmile I think I let my imagination run away with me blushing How are you sweetie, how's life/love and the universe?


Me thinks it was more than just your imagination,,,

Love, life and the Universe is quite incredible.. I am in the arms of the man I so love,, Daniel and the kids are fantastic,, spent time with my grandchildren this past weekend,, and the Universe is still shining a ray of light

My love to you and Michael,,, Hugs and Kiss's :heart:

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/22/08 08:38 PM
Marjorie, the heat is on and the fans are going full blast...if there is a part two...I'm calling the fire department.


Will work on it just for you Wolfey baby laugh laugh

songstress1's photo
Tue 01/22/08 09:44 PM
Whew!!! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Oh Rob!!!! where are you honey...come here!!devil They really need a smiley with a fan..wow!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/22/08 09:52 PM

Whew!!! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Oh Rob!!!! where are you honey...come here!!devil They really need a smiley with a fan..wow!

I'm right here in front of the fan already...but ready to start back up if you are.

frankfk's photo
Wed 01/23/08 05:35 AM
VERY WELL WRITTENflowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 01/23/08 05:58 AM
Thanks Frank, how are you? flowerforyou flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Wed 01/23/08 05:59 AM
GOOD AND U BONNY?

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:01 AM
Trying to keep body and soul together,as always bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:06 AM
KEEP IT UPBEAT URSELF, REGARDLESS THE DIRECTION OF THE WINDS AND WAVESflowerforyou
Trying to keep body and soul together,as always bigsmile

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:12 AM
Such a good tone to today's quote Frank,love it flowerforyou

KAY KAY 's photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:16 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:20 AM
Bravo!

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 01/23/08 06:22 AM
Thank you Kay,

Thank you and welcome to JSH Kitty flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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