This was written by my ex (once again to be my current, I hope) right
after 9/11.

I tried to call America this morning
But She was too busy searching for her missing children
Please try your call at another time.

I tried to call America this afternoon
But She was too busy mourning for the slaughtered innocents
To answer the phone
Could I please call back at a more appropriate time.

I tried to call America this evening
But all I got was a busy signal as She girded Herself for war
The party I was trying to reach was not available at this time.

So I hung up the phone and walked down to America
I searched for the living and collected the dead
And together we mourned as one
And I raged with her and wept tears of loss
And offered Her the comfort of my Embrace
And the phone rang regardless.

learn to rhyme? nice poem though

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme...gahh another freakin critic

He's more interested in gettin some than understandin poetry. These kids
nowadays.......

Yeah I know...


Karma pass word on that its a very touching and awesome poem and thanks
for sharing it with us

these kids nowadays will be running this country when you are old and
wrinkly (if u arent already). so wake up, dont just dismiss youth as
frugal, naive rabbit dicks. open ur eyes and wipe the smudges off ur
glasses. lol, this country;s goin down fast.. but yeah tahts a nice
poem, but a rhyme scheme woulda been better.

Imtony. Try reading Haiku. No rhyme just feeling.

Yony, why are you such a moron? GOD GROW UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How you gonna run the country if my non-graduatin ass is already more
educated than you? Quit thinkin with your dick man. I appreciate the
fact you have high self-confidence, really I do, but some of the things
you say make you sound ignorant. I'm 28, so not that wrinkely there
fella-guy!

and just for the record yes i know i put yony, I just wanted to see if
he was reading what people are saying, or thinging with that worm
between his legs.

DAMN FANTA you are such a kid, get off of the keyboard before I have to
spank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its fun getting teamed up on by a bunch of internet misfits. a real
motley crew the lot of you are. its funny that when u want to attack
someone u go straight for penis size. id love to leave a big old
mushroom stamp and beat ur face around with my manhood ; then hear u
describe as "worm".

btw, i love that ur so ugly u put a tiger as ur pic. must suck not to
be able to put a REAL pic on a site. do u have elephantitis er
something? er whats going on there?

I aint tryin to team up on ya, just tryin to open your eyes. :) Look
around you dude, there's a world full of people that know more than you
and I combined. Just think.

DON'T TRY AND TEASE THE KITTY. VERY HUNGRY, THAT ORANGE LITTLE KITTY
WAS'T ENOUGH.


But don't worry, I would eat you and spit out your little worm, but i am
trying to cut down on the junk food.

If ya want to get technical, we aren't the ones talkin about no gay shit
in one post, and in another talkin about your homie's cock.
HHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMMM. Sounds awfully gay to me.

lol

god i would love to hurt u so very very bad

wever got a dropout, fat ass, piece of crap, whos prolly never gotten
laid. prolly flippin throuhg between this board and WOW. god i cant
stand people like u livin off ur mom and dad and stuff. please jump in
front of a bus. all of u who are insulting me, seroiusly, get hurt real
bad, cause that would be real awesome ;)

See, kids nowadays....... thanx for provin my point! :)