Topic: ADD TO THE STORY.....
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Sun 01/20/08 06:08 AM
Everyone add to the story. You can add as much or as little as you like. Take it where ever you want it to go!




There was a girl named Susan. She was a bartender. Everynight when she got to work there was this one guy sitting in the same seat. He was her biggest fan.
One night she got to work and noticed he wasn't there. Who would have thought this was the begining of the weirdest night of her life.


Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:16 AM
An hour after Susan began work, her biggest fan walked in. He was carrying a dozen of roses, and dressed in a tuxedo. Susan was feeling some heartbreak. She never realized that she was beginning to care about him, and was wondering who the lucky lady was when.........

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Sun 01/20/08 06:21 AM
and then susan keeps watching him who's that girl and hours pass by but the man still is alone with his roses..finally when the bar closes suddenly she sees that the man has left with the roses there on the table , she slowy moved towards it and sees a letter inside it...her heart begans to throb...she sees here n there and pics up the letter..to her surprise...in that letter..its written..

someone pls continue from here

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:24 AM
I have come to this bar nightly so that I may feast my eyes on you. The laughter that comes from your lips brings a joy to my heart. Tonight I came with the thought in mind, to ask you to be mine. But alas I couldn't ask you the question that I wished, because I didn't know how you would like to have a vampire for a mate. So I leave you these roses, as a gesture of my love, because I had to leave before I.........

aLittleBird's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:31 AM
missed my favorite TV show. Anyway...please think about it.

love and kisses,

vampy

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Sun 01/20/08 06:32 AM
turn into a different one after 12:00pm...the girl finds this very thrilling...she has always had the ultimate crave for being loved by a vampire from her childhood..and she never told thid to anyone coz no one as people (her parents or her frens) wud ridicule her..she took the roses that night and left...next day she was in her best dress in black looking cool n sexy and skipped of the job that night and waited outside for that MAN of her dreams!!!!waited for 2 hrs and he's not yet come...suddenly she seems him coming..then...........

mrboosted's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:34 AM
P.S My beer was HOT

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:44 AM
at the sight of him, she began to get nervous, knowing that if she wished to be with the man that she fell in love with, that her life was about to change. Taking a few minutes to think she delved deep into her heart, to think about the changes in her life that she was facing, and........

aLittleBird's photo
Sun 01/20/08 06:45 AM
well, that didn't last too long...lol..try again?

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Sun 01/20/08 07:07 AM

at the sight of him, she began to get nervous, knowing that if she wished to be with the man that she fell in love with, that her life was about to change. Taking a few minutes to think she delved deep into her heart, to think about the changes in her life that she was facing, and........


she talked to herself...i didnt had anyone who has shown me love nor even liked me...i am alone in this world and now i have someone who waists for me who comes to see me..i wud not miss this..as soon he approached she gav him a cute sexy smile and looked into his eyes...he understood that she accepted his inviation for love..he was fully prepared for the treat that night..he is dress up in a leatheer top and looking so rugged..she was indeed feeling yeah this is my MAN...he comes closer offers her his hand,,,she also holds his hand..and didnt say each other a word yet...they started moving on the road towards the beach...

kkKen's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:10 AM
When they get there,he buries her up to her neck in the sand

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:15 AM
He explains to her that he must do that so that she doesn't jerk when he takes the first bite, if not done properly she will not be able to become his vampire bride. So giving him her trust she looks faithfully into his eyes, and says.........

kkKen's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:23 AM
"Are you fuc*kin nuts or what?
So she screams out for help

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Sun 01/20/08 07:26 AM
Crushed and bewidlered by her change in feelings, the vampire slowly takes his anger into control. He is so deeply in love with Susan that he steps back, and leaves her buried in the sand, unable to take the bite that will change her into his for enterity(spelling). Susan gains control, and begins to scream for him...........