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Edited by
justmenoel
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Wed 01/16/08 08:26 PM
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im not afraid to fall
just scared where i might land lets take this leap together we'll do it hand in hand ill be there for you through the good and the bad ill wipe away your tears when life makes you sad ill be there to listen when no one else is there this love i have inside is something i wanna share so look into my eyes let me show you that i care lets walk this path of life not seperate but as a pair ill be your inner stregnth when your ready to give up ill show you that life is better not with half-but rather a full cup i promise to you now that ill love you with all of me lets not waste another moment lets start making memories |
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Edited by
Derekkye
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Wed 01/16/08 08:16 PM
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ok (let's start)
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i like it
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the hope within keeps us all on that path
good write |
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A Great poem, by a great person, I like it alot
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That was Beautiful, well done!
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thank you guys!!!--and gals
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Sweet. Very nice.
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Very Nice!
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Awesome
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thanks
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like the best ive heard ever
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Very nice poem.
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Very nice
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another great poem Noel, I hope you keep writing and sharing more
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