Topic: promises
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Wed 01/16/08 08:13 PM
Edited by justmenoel on Wed 01/16/08 08:26 PM
im not afraid to fall
just scared where i might land
lets take this leap together
we'll do it hand in hand

ill be there for you
through the good and the bad
ill wipe away your tears
when life makes you sad

ill be there to listen
when no one else is there
this love i have inside
is something i wanna share

so look into my eyes
let me show you that i care
lets walk this path of life
not seperate but as a pair

ill be your inner stregnth
when your ready to give up
ill show you that life is better
not with half-but rather a full cup

i promise to you now
that ill love you with all of me
lets not waste another moment
lets start making memories

Derekkye's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:14 PM
Edited by Derekkye on Wed 01/16/08 08:16 PM
ok :smile: (let's start)

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Wed 01/16/08 08:15 PM
i like it

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:16 PM
the hope within keeps us all on that path

good write

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TrueJedi's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:16 PM
A Great poem, by a great person, I like it alot flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:17 PM
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nadius's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:18 PM
That was Beautiful, well done!

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Wed 01/16/08 08:18 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou thank you guys!!!--and gals

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Wed 01/16/08 08:21 PM
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Just_Say_When's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:23 PM
Sweet. flowerforyou Very nice.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:23 PM
Very Nice! flowerforyou

PATSFAN's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:24 PM
Awesomeflowerforyou

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Wed 01/16/08 08:27 PM
thanksflowerforyou

bford1983's photo
Wed 01/16/08 09:22 PM
like the best ive heard ever

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Thu 01/17/08 06:45 AM
Very nice poem. flowerforyou

DTHRomeo's photo
Thu 01/17/08 01:42 PM
Very nice flowerforyou

Claudette's photo
Sat 01/19/08 04:20 PM
another great poem Noel, I hope you keep writing and sharing moreflowerforyou