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Momma she asks
Eyes wide with wonder The scars , momma On your wrist Where do they come from I look down Seeing the jagged ugly reminders I touch them Carressing them softly like a lover My angel I say These are from a time before you When the angels weeped And life almost ceased Momma, please explain she asks As I gather her in my arms Holding her tight I begin my tale Long ago before you came Momma was in so much pain The world seemed to crush me From inside Darkness surrounded me night and day I could not see the pale moonlight I could not see the sun shining so bright And the angels weeped Through the night I carried the knife from the kitchen Into the bath Steam was rising from the water This was long before you daughter I climbed in to the tub Water sloshing to the floor As I silently prayed once more The blade cut deep upon my wrists I couldn't see through the mists And the angels weeped Someone lifted me high above Carrying me on the wings of a dove The knife clattered to the floor As I prayed silently once more Lights so bright I could not see So many voices above me And the angels weeped I awoke to the softest voice A sister saying I had a choice So many prayers she said were made For my soul to be remade The sunlight streamed through the window And I wept I grew stronger each day Thanking the angels Who saved me that day Only once more have I heard The angels weep On a bright beautiful day When my little angel came to stay Momma, I hear the angels She says With a sad look upon her face Don't worry my precious one I whisper softly through her hair The angels are always near Only now my little one They sing with joy |
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WOW...
*takes note of wrists* |
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*whispers not my wrists my beloved*
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Damn girl now that is some powerful
stuff But I know its not you. But the words are soooo powerful. Hummm I expect this one to be in that book!!! |
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That is truly touching.
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Thanks Gurly for th kind words and knowing it wasn't me. Yeah this one
is going in the book for sure!! Thanks karma |
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I see I am not the only soul to survive. Great work CCP
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her works fill my soul...and warm my heart...M.
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Again, this chicky just blows me away. Her intensitiy is astounding, its
lik she sees all the world's pain and can put it into words that everyone can plainly see.Some publisher better pick her up quick, it would be a sin for the world not to see her work!!! |
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yea, she is currently working on a book...she is my love... :)~
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Gurl you are to fkin funny LMAO Ok yall she been readin my words for 15
years and sayin the publisher bit for 15 years lol But yeah I am workin on a book and workin to get it published MUCH LOVE RHIANNON GURL!! |
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I LOVE THE MEANING AND YOUR POINT, AND WHERE IT WENT,
BUT YOU DID JUST TEACH YOUR DAUGHTER TO CUT HER WRISTS. SORRY, I LOVED IT OTHER THAN 'THAT' THAT I COULD NOT TAKE OUT! |
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T no daughter here, just a son. This is a totally fictional piece,
nothing I personally experienced. Just something tha came to me and needed to be written, there is a moral or something behind it. Suicide is never ever a solution, there are othr means to get through the pain of life, pick up a pen and write it out. |
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