“The Wall Crumbles”

There was a wall that had been built.
Slowly but surely it started to tilt.
Inch by inch they chipped at the brick.
That had been laid so thick.

Within time it started to thin.
They started to feel as if they would win.
Why in time had it seemed.
That it was deemed.

It was necessary to build such a wall.
That no one could even begin to crawl.
Over and see.
What life could be.

Within these walls it felt.
As if no one again could melt.
This heart and soon again leave it broken.
Not wanting to hear those words spoken.

Just words that some have no clue.
They should say them only when they are true.
But within time there was this one.
A heart once broken they have won.

So slowly but surely they started to chip.
Away at that wall and made ones heart again skip.
A beat then two it happen so fast.
Wondering will this last.

Then they watched the wall.
Slowly start to crumble and fall.
They stood and looked around.
Down it fell to the ground.
There they stood and looked at the mound.
They realized there heart had been found.


K.L.M
1/14/2008

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Breaking down the wall is the hardest thing to do,, Yet when it falls this incredible feeling overcomes you and when your heart and soul see that of another,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh WoW,,,

when someone truly wants something they will knock those walls down great job

Somehow, someway, I felt this poem was meant for me, I know it wasn't but it felt so close, I took a back, and shedded a tear, cause those walls of mine are slowing falling to the ground, but with someone very dear, your poem has touched me right to the core, again Kristi, your writes I adore