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Topic: I want you
NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sat 01/12/08 02:42 PM
what do you honestly think? When I dream Are you there? Black and white My worst nightmare Be with me And I shall see color Clouds Rolling Our perfect skies Are you here? Don't be out there Don't be in her head You haven't seen, My face, talking, I smile, so young So full of hope A year went by And I cried 'til I slept Feelings are fast Oh so strong Don't let me scare you I'm sorry if I do I want to be upfront But afraid you'll run Back to her.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 01/12/08 02:43 PM
Excellent

TJokerzWild Joined Tue 05/08/07 Posts: 880	Sat 01/12/08 02:44 PM


tdiff Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 53	Sat 01/12/08 02:45 PM
Deep sounds like you been hurt

tonylee52 Joined Fri 01/04/08 Posts: 2035	Sat 01/12/08 02:48 PM
sweet heart. i posted a forum THE MOST PERFECT HEART. you should go read it

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Sat 01/12/08 02:49 PM
Very nice...& welcome

Ghostrider2u Joined Thu 05/17/07 Posts: 6953	Sat 01/12/08 02:52 PM
I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!! VeryDeep........

Blackfox12 Joined Tue 12/18/07 Posts: 4330	Sat 01/12/08 02:54 PM
Great wright

snowangel2 Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 3798	Sat 01/12/08 03:04 PM
YES very good but deep poem.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 01/12/08 03:39 PM
Very nice and welcome to the site.

NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sat 01/12/08 04:19 PM
thanks everyone. i feel very welcome already

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76392	Sat 01/12/08 04:22 PM
Very good hope to see you posting more in the future. Also welcome to the site as well.

NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sat 01/12/08 05:17 PM
Very good hope to see you posting more in the future. Also welcome to the site as well. thanks. i do have lots more but didnt want to "spam" this place on my first day.

robinlynn42 Joined Tue 01/01/08 Posts: 2251	Sat 01/12/08 05:21 PM
wonderful.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 01/12/08 05:55 PM
Spam all you want too...the more you post, the better the chances of getting viewed.

NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sat 01/12/08 06:14 PM
Spam all you want too...the more you post, the better the chances of getting viewed. sweet!..lol..thanks! goes to spam

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 01/12/08 06:31 PM
Very nice,,, Welcome

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 01/12/08 09:03 PM
I like that one. Kinda hits ya right at home.

NxOhMissFriedxD Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 39	Sun 01/13/08 09:58 AM
this is my favorite one right now that i have written.

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