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Edited by
Unknow
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Fri 01/11/08 07:52 AM
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Resonating with my soul
Reaching deep within You hesitate Staying one step Behind Why don't you let Me in? Unguarded, allowing all to see Layers upon Layers The many depths of Me. Pierce through my Pain My hollow Shell Once filled with Sacrifice. Music now Ebbs and Flows Through is illuminous Vice. Will you reach Me Will you Dare Tread where others Fear? Capture my spirit like Gossamer wings Taken Upon the wind. One step Behind You Hesitate How long will you Stay.. One step Behind Me Shall I Wait Until that fateful Day. 1*11*2008 |
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Wow, ((((((((Stormy)))))))), that was amazing
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That was really good Storm. I enjoyed that one.
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Sweet, yet mysterious...
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(((((( storm )))))))
I read you and a calm takes over me,,, Hugs to you,,,
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very good write
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Greatness foreshadowed and festooned her name
in lamplight ochres red and burnt siennas She is storm and signal message and symbol Finding my way home An anchor along the way |
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Yet....still.............
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I hesitate....
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i was lucky to meet you....your words..your take on life...
a beautiful voice... i'm at a loss for words...but yours make up for that you're beautiful an amazing woman |
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Great write!
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Thank you
Everyone~ |
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that was nice
i liked it
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Thank you kc0003
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Sun 01/13/08 02:26 AM
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This is raw directness cloaked only to blind eyes. I am humbled by your ability to be so open.
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