Topic: Timing
kc0003's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:29 PM


My thoughts
are of you this morning
As my feet awkwardly
find the floor
The cold wood underneath
a reminder,
of what waits outside your door

He’ll never forgive you
for this one
She couldn’t hate me
much more
Just friends, I know
we’ll stick to it
We’ve had a lot of practice

One night of passion
A lifetime to fall
Always in different harbors
With other ports of call

Timing is everything


kc08

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Mon 01/07/08 10:52 PM
been there my friend...
it just never worked out...life huh?

kc0003's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:57 PM
((( D )))

it is just a write
but i think we all go through things like this

drinker

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Tue 01/08/08 08:11 AM
yes we do


drinker drinker

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:13 AM
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Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:20 AM
Very good simile KC...I know what you were talking about...I liked it.

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:29 AM

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((((Mom))))

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:35 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Tue 01/08/08 08:45 AM

Very good simile KC...I know what you were talking about...I liked it.




Thanks wolf
I was trying to keep it, like the situation
out of plain view if that makes sense

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/08/08 08:52 AM
Good write just goes to show just because things are out of sight they are not always out of mind.flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/08/08 09:37 AM
you are right....not always out of mind

flowerforyou

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Tue 01/08/08 05:59 PM
i had a friend like this years ago
timing never was right...

stef

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/09/08 12:48 AM

i had a friend like this years ago
timing never was right...

stef


many things have to be right stef

Noden's photo
Thu 01/10/08 03:21 AM
Oh how I know this well, wishing to just be without the prying eyes...

Nice Readdrinker smokin flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 01/10/08 09:36 AM
great poem, loved it!:smile:

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/10/08 10:35 AM

Oh how I know this well, wishing to just be without the prying eyes...

Nice Readdrinker smokin flowerforyou



ah but the eyes follow us wherever we go...
thank you for the post

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/10/08 11:34 AM

great poem, loved it!:smile:


pkd
thank you!

flowerforyou

Tameka's photo
Fri 01/11/08 08:18 PM
is very sad.:cry:



but very nice.flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 01/11/08 08:32 PM
drinker