Topic: Thank you
Dragoness's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:04 AM
I had never written poetry, apart from Haiku once in elementary school, before coming on this site. I am now studying the different forms. I found my normal form here has been quatrains. This will be a blank verse, my first.

Thank you

For all of those who
have read and commented
on my wistful sharing
of parts of me
put in a verse
I just say thank you
for all your kindness
you have inspired me
to share more and more
So bear with me
I hope you enjoy
as I bare my soul

bc 01/07/08

Cutietwo55's photo
Mon 01/07/08 10:06 AM
Yes, very good. Keep writing poetry.

Dragoness's photo
Mon 01/07/08 12:29 PM
thank you cutieflowerforyou

no photo
Mon 01/07/08 12:33 PM
Very nice and simply put.


NOOOOO...thank you for sharing. bigsmile flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/07/08 12:35 PM
Awwww as I have been told any words upon the page from the heart is poetry so many different styles but all still poetry. Very nice. Keep it upbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/07/08 02:45 PM
Thank you flowerforyou :heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 01/07/08 04:26 PM
Barb, that was really good. Keep it up. I look forward to seeing more from you. I really enjoyed that.

Dragoness's photo
Mon 01/07/08 07:26 PM
Thank you jelly, txs, LA, Robertflowerforyou flowerforyou I am feeling this medium. I have only been published in articles of current events before. I have heard this medium is for the starving who plan to stay starving though so I guess I will just keep using it for the beautiful expression that it is. I am working on my free flowing technique now. So don't worry......I will be back....lolbigsmile

Ya'll are wonderful, I just have to sayflowerforyou

Noden's photo
Mon 01/07/08 07:36 PM
Can't wait to see more, flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Tue 01/08/08 07:46 AM
Thanks nodenflowerforyou bigsmile

Twitch's photo
Tue 01/08/08 07:47 AM
Dragon -- simple and to the point flowerforyou
Very Nice flowerforyou
Keep writing girl flowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Tue 01/08/08 07:49 AM
Thank you twitchflowerforyou I appreciate your supportflowerforyou