You're a tough case to crack

So exposed yet so tightly wrapped

maybe if you weren't so afraid of coming undone

you would enjoy the story

outside of fabrication

but I understand

You've been beaten and bruised

torn and confused

cut up and drug down

and now you completely unravel

at the pull of one weak thread

my mind flashes back

to a thousand unfinished memories

of so many words unspoken

So now to contain my sanity

by the ounces and seconds i can still grasp

I'll speak the words that should have been mentioned

But conversation fell short every time

Feel now and think later was the policy she lived by

What happens to our soul

when emotion takes over and reality dissapears

When your body talks and mind stops

Only in our subconcsious

will the true reality come into play

that you are completely out of control

but for your own sanity you wrap yourself in oblivion

So, when the time comes

for you to be carefully untangled

I'll be here, waiting patiently

let me know when you're ready

for me to quote the subconscious

I'll be the only one to say, "You're completely out of control"

So sad from someone who posseses so much beauty...

we all have our flaws
outside or in...
im emotional
lol it happens

Thx. for being honest and sharing. I read alot of poems here. Your's was nice. Sad though..

aw well thanks for the encouragement
writing is my emotional release
better put it on paper than scream it in someones face

Id rather you write it than scream in my face too. If you have more you can always send them my way, Cindy..

heh i have tons..but most of them no one understands

Try me...

One sometimes has yet to understand but to listen...
Kevin

aww yes
thats very true
sometimes thats all it takes is listening
and with that you'll understand on a whole new level
oh ps..im pretty sure your arms are bigger than my body

Well I didnt think we would go from youre lovely poetry to my arms but remember Cindy, even the strongest of men become weak to the allure of a beautiful woman...

Perfect!

Speaks volumes, and resonates clearly within me, thankyou for sharing this.

A true poet will understand them. Post them anyways and you will see who the true poets are. Take the chance.

Good write and welcome to the site hope to see more of your work