Topic: Visitation
RichardDavid's photo
Sun 01/06/08 05:12 PM
Visitation
by: Richard Skoropat

Two days on
And fourteen gone
What the hell’s happened here?
All of my hopes gone
All of my dreams
Who the hell are you now
Who gave you the power
She is half of you
And half of me
Two days for me
And fourteen leave
So all your NEW hopes
And all your NEW dreams
Came true today on the stand
Got everything you wanted:
All for YOU
Fourteen on
And two days gone

RichardDavid's photo
Sun 01/06/08 05:12 PM
such a happy little poem :)

Shaden's photo
Sun 01/06/08 05:15 PM
I'm sory if it was an unfair decision. It isn't always, but sounds like you're hurting..sorry to hear that.

RichardDavid's photo
Sun 01/06/08 05:17 PM
thank you!! very kind, you are :) but it was a LONG time ago

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 01/06/08 06:53 PM
good one and hope things have gotten betterbigsmile