Topic: Time......... | |
---|---|
Time.....
Walking down the steps of time. Pondering my existence, wondering why. I saw an image of my life. A frame of time that once was mine. I was young a happy soul. Then came death and I grew old. Sadden by this frame of time. I took another step and cried. And with each step that I then took. Lead me closer to this book. A book of stories, tales of hate. Ones my past helped create. Yet step by step I still stand. Waiting for death to take this man. But I'll still walk I never stop. Till I die or time gives up............... Codelockbox.... R.I.P My Father Raymon and My Mother Annabelle |
|
|
|
it is called the game of life.......nobody wins...........
|
|
|
|
wow thats sad...good but sad
|
|
|
|
Love the poem
|
|
|
|
nice words
|
|
|
|
Time..... Walking down the steps of time. Pondering my existence, wondering why. I saw an image of my life. A frame of time that once was mine. I was young a happy soul. Then came death and I grew old. Sadden by this frame of time. I took another step and cried. And with each step that I then took. Lead me closer to this book. A book of stories, tales of hate. Ones my past helped create. Yet step by step I still stand. Waiting for death to take this man. But I'll still walk I never stop. Till I die or time gives up............... Codelockbox.... R.I.P My Father Raymon and My Mother Annabelle awesome!!!!! |
|
|
|
Thanks everyone who took the time to read my poem.
|
|
|
|
Awesome but sad one must never let the past make ones heart cold. Yes I have been there and death took both of my parents one when I was only a baby. But.... they are have never left you as long as you carry them within your heart. Good write and welcome to the site.
|
|
|
|
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh welcome to the family,,, Sad yet i so enjoyed the read
|
|
|
|
This is really
good, and I can kindly relate.. very nice word- usage.. -Lozer <3 |
|
|