Topic: Time.........
codelockbox's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:37 PM
Time.....

Walking down the steps of time.
Pondering my existence, wondering why.
I saw an image of my life.
A frame of time that once was mine.

I was young a happy soul.
Then came death and I grew old.
Sadden by this frame of time.
I took another step and cried.

And with each step that I then took.
Lead me closer to this book.
A book of stories, tales of hate.
Ones my past helped create.

Yet step by step I still stand.
Waiting for death to take this man.
But I'll still walk I never stop.
Till I die or time gives up............... Codelockbox....


R.I.P My Father Raymon and My Mother Annabelle

no photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:39 PM
it is called the game of life.......nobody wins...........

Suzanne20's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:44 PM
wow thats sad...good but sad

Eleanor888's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:45 PM
Love the poem :smile:

kc0003's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:48 PM
nice words


drinker

afarawayprincess's photo
Sat 01/05/08 11:02 PM

Time.....

Walking down the steps of time.
Pondering my existence, wondering why.
I saw an image of my life.
A frame of time that once was mine.

I was young a happy soul.
Then came death and I grew old.
Sadden by this frame of time.
I took another step and cried.

And with each step that I then took.
Lead me closer to this book.
A book of stories, tales of hate.
Ones my past helped create.

Yet step by step I still stand.
Waiting for death to take this man.
But I'll still walk I never stop.
Till I die or time gives up............... Codelockbox....


R.I.P My Father Raymon and My Mother Annabelle


awesome!!!!!

codelockbox's photo
Sat 01/05/08 11:09 PM
Thanks everyone who took the time to read my poem.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 01/05/08 11:14 PM
Awesome but sad:cry: one must never let the past make ones heart cold. Yes I have been there and death took both of my parents one when I was only a baby. But.... they are have never left you as long as you carry them within your heart. Good write and welcome to the site.bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/05/08 11:17 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh welcome to the family,,, Sad yet i so enjoyed the read flowerforyou

Lozer's photo
Sat 01/05/08 11:19 PM
This is really
good, and I can
kindly relate..
very nice word-
usage..

-Lozer <3