Topic: Help please
Xunderestimate's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:12 PM
Does anyone have a deep love poem they can share with me

itsmetina's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:12 PM
u've been asking that repeatly look one up

justme659's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:14 PM
clap , clap, tina laugh laugh

azrae1l's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:15 PM
your gonna give it to somebody, it's better if you convey your own feelings

livelaughlove14's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:15 PM
idk if this is very deep...
I want my head on your shoulder
With the snow covered world outside our window
The darkness will cover us, like our blanket, from the cold
A roaring glow from the fireplace
Will match the silent jubilee from my heart

It will all makes sense to us someday
This world that makes us feel so alone
But I’ll know when I hold your hand and feel that warmth
That I won’t have to fight it alone anymore

With the weight of the world on my shoulder
It’s easy to forget everyone isn’t against me
Time will let me know who stands beside me
Because right now who people are isn’t so clear to me

I look into the water and I see my reflection
But I don’t understand it and I’m afraid I never will
The ripples make it always changing and that’s a scary thing to see
It’s distorted when everything around me is beautiful

The scenery all around me is bursting to life
While I fall behind and wonder who will save my soul
Like an injured soldier I want to be carried off the battlefield
But everyone is running and no one bothers to look down

It’s so hard to change someone’s image of you
Sometimes they only see the bad because that’s all you give them
They turn their heads so they don’t see the inevitable
Life is so short so why do we waist our time with them?

Everyone has it rough so everyone has surprises
We all wear masks like we’re in some sort of parade
With some it’s easier to get rid of that mask
For others it’s easier not to wear one

Either way we will experience and then we will run
We will fall and we will get back up
Because that’s how we choose to live

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Sat 01/05/08 08:15 PM
love is started by a conversation which leads into temptation,when i stick my foundation into her communication will it increase the population,does she need a demonstration for her further education...................

deltasissy's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:16 PM
Here's a famous love poem for you by Alfred Noyes

The Highwayman


The wind was a torrent of darkness upon the gusty trees,
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
The road was a ribbon of moonlight looping the purple moor,
And the highwayman came riding--
Riding--riding--
The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn door.

He'd a French cocked hat on his forehead, and a bunch of lace at his chin;
He'd a coat of the claret velvet, and breeches of fine doe-skin.
They fitted with never a wrinkle; his boots were up to his thigh!
And he rode with a jeweled twinkle--
His rapier hilt a-twinkle--
His pistol butts a-twinkle, under the jeweled sky.

Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard,
He tapped with his whip on the shutters, but all was locked and barred,
He whistled a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter--
Bess, the landlord's daughter--
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.

Dark in the dark old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked
Where Tim, the ostler listened--his face was white and peaked--
His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay,
But he loved the landlord's daughter--
The landlord's black-eyed daughter;
Dumb as a dog he listened, and he heard the robber say:

"One kiss, my bonny sweetheart; I'm after a prize tonight,
But I shall be back with the yellow gold before the morning light.
Yet if they press me sharply, and harry me through the day,
Then look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight,
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way."

He stood upright in the stirrups; he scarce could reach her hand,
But she loosened her hair in the casement! His face burnt like a brand
As the sweet black waves of perfume came tumbling o'er his breast,
Then he kissed its waves in the moonlight
(O sweet black waves in the moonlight!),
And he tugged at his reins in the moonlight, and galloped away to the west.

He did not come in the dawning; he did not come at noon.
And out of the tawny sunset, before the rise of the moon,
When the road was a gypsy's ribbon over the purple moor,
The redcoat troops came marching--
Marching--marching--
King George's men came marching, up to the old inn-door.

They said no word to the landlord; they drank his ale instead,
But they gagged his daughter and bound her to the foot of her narrow bed.
Two of them knelt at her casement, with muskets by their side;
There was Death at every window,
And Hell at one dark window,
For Bess could see, through her casement, the road that he would ride.

They had bound her up at attention, with many a sniggering jest!
They had tied a rifle beside her, with the barrel beneath her breast!
"Now keep good watch!" and they kissed her. She heard the dead man say,
"Look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight,
I'll come to thee by moonlight, though Hell should bar the way."

She twisted her hands behind her, but all the knots held good!
She writhed her hands till her fingers were wet with sweat or blood!
They stretched and strained in the darkness, and the hours crawled by like years,
Till, on the stroke of midnight,
Cold on the stroke of midnight,
The tip of one finger touched it! The trigger at least was hers!

The tip of one finger touched it, she strove no more for the rest;
Up, she stood up at attention, with the barrel beneath her breast.
She would not risk their hearing, she would not strive again,
For the road lay bare in the moonlight,
Blank and bare in the moonlight,
And the blood in her veins, in the moonlight, throbbed to her love's refrain.

Tlot tlot, tlot tlot! Had they heard it? The horse-hooves, ringing clear;
Tlot tlot, tlot tlot, in the distance! Were they deaf that they did not hear?
Down the ribbon of moonlight, over the brow of the hill,
The highwayman came riding--
Riding--riding--
The redcoats looked to their priming! She stood up straight and still.

Tlot tlot, in the frosty silence! Tlot tlot, in the echoing night!
Nearer he came and nearer! Her face was like a light!
Her eyes grew wide for a moment, she drew one last deep breath,
Then her finger moved in the moonlight--
Her musket shattered the moonlight--
Shattered her breast in the moonlight and warned him--with her death.

He turned, he spurred to the West; he did not know who stood
Bowed, with her head o'er the casement, drenched in her own red blood!
Not till the dawn did he hear it, and his face grew grey to hear
How Bess, the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's black-eyed daughter,
Had watched for her love in the moonlight, and died in the darkness there.

Back, he spurred like a madman, shrieking a curse to the sky,
With the white road smoking behind him and his rapier brandished high!
Blood-red were his spurs in the golden noon, wine-red was his velvet coat
When they shot him down in the highway,
Down like a dog in the highway,
And he lay in his blood in the highway, with the bunch of lace at his throat.

And still on a winter's night, they say, when the wind is in the trees,
When the moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas,
When the road is a gypsy's ribbon looping the purple moor,
The highwayman comes riding--
Riding--riding--
The highwayman comes riding, up to the old inn-door.

Over the cobbles he clatters and clangs in the dark inn-yard,
He taps with his whip on the shutters, but all is locked and barred,
He whistles a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there
But the landlord's black-eyed daughter--
Bess, the landlord's daughter--
Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair.

Alfred Noyes



shan1987's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:17 PM
actually this one is different.. but no sorry

Rose41's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:22 PM
im with azrae1l on this one...let the words come from your own feelings

1blondie57's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:25 PM
you can't tell someone how you feel with someone elses words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

deltasissy's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:30 PM
Hey, Loverboy, Here's another one.

EE Cummings - i carry your heart
i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go,my dear;and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)

i fear
no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
higher than soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

itsmetina's photo
Sat 01/05/08 08:56 PM
if i wanted i'd be out now

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Sun 01/06/08 10:52 AM
She walks in beauty like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellowed to the tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

One ray the more, one shade the less
Had half impaired the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress
Or softly lightens o'er her face,
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling place.

And on that cheek and o'er that brow
So soft, so calm yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow
But tell of days in goodness spent
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent.

-- Lord Byron, (George Gordon)

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Sun 01/06/08 10:53 AM
A MAN does not talk to a woman the way you are speaking to her. Be nice.