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My blood so red, my heart so dead
The words are said, but I don't care The crimson stream, my dying scream My fate to deem, so take me there The razor sharp, the deadly harp The mind to ward, the soul to keep The heart to break, the breath to take To never wake, eternal sleep The days to brood, the ways ensued The interlude, the muddled mind The hanging noose, to bring the truce And set me loose, from out this bind |
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Nicely written thoughts and confusion.
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Wow. I really like this,
however, maybe it'd flow better if you'd do it like this: My blood so red, my heart so dead The words are said, but I don't care.. or something of the sort? In any manner, nice piece and thankiez for the read! - Lozer =3 |
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