In Life we fail time and again, the hurt the pain it seems to not mend, and when we look so long at the past, we dwell in our failings and bad times we had, Look to the future it could be bright, Sit with me here under the stary night, and if you dare to wish and dream, I wish u the best to wipe your slate clean, but dareing not to look ahead, well my friends your better off dead, So is it better to have loved and lost, What is the price what is the cost?, a dead soul and a heart layed to shatter, or new begings and a new love to flatter?

Beautiful!!!

wow. that just described my situation right now perfectly... thank you!

not bad, but it seems as if you don't spell all that well. sorry.

No sir my vocabulary is extensive and my spelling is atrocious Guess I cant win them all. But I would rather have the vocab then worry bout the spelling. Long as the message gets across thats all that matters. Oh and helmsman just cause the ladies like my verse u don't have to rain on the parade oh and ladies thank you I'm glad u liked it

Ladies are not the only ones.
That was beautiful. May I save it to my computer?

Awww words of wisdom

Nice

LOL Im so glad u all liked my work...and that was freestyle written on the spot. I will post some stuff I took time on later tonight. And yes u may save it to your computer if you like it that much..just that one thou not all my works lol cant have someone else gettin money for my writing j/k