Topic: femboy hear
Femboy Hilda 's photo
Mon 09/09/24 08:45 PM
check out my profile please

Mortman's photo
Mon 09/09/24 11:35 PM
It's a good start, but the pictures could be a lot better and your text blurb is a mess.

I like that your text blurb lays it out what you're dealing with, what you like and what you're headed toward. Good for you! Only, you didn't fix the typos, and there are several. Maybe that's my problem, and you're being yourself, and maybe even put those in on purpose to seem care-free or artistic, but it bothers me. I'd say I'm not your target, but you don't say what you're looking for. That'd be something good to include in the blurb.

It's annoying that all your pictures cut off part of your face or head. Like they were shot in a hurry and you don't really care how they turned out. Maybe you could get a friend to take some pictures of you, and have them make sure not to leave your head and face out of the shot. Maybe dress a bit nicer when taking them. Again, maybe I'm missing the point of your lifestyle and that's the way you want to be seen, but to me, it looks messy. The camera angle is good--shooting from above like that brings out the cheekbones. A smile would've been nice, but you do you.

Honestly, I'm a bit confused by the "femboy" thing, and don't know everything that it brings with it, so I could be completely upside-down on this, but from a conventional standpoint, the profile needs better photos and maybe some small fixes to the text. As is, I'd rate it 6/10.

Good luck!

P.S. I've been working in the computer software industry, and know it's your passion that will get you the furthest. Don't back down; keep working on that dream!