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Topic: Island Girl
Hammer Joined Thu 07/11/24 Posts: 551	Wed 09/04/24 12:03 AM
Go to work,rainbow clouds Splashing puddles, still got paid! Feed the tarpon, razor sharp teeth Keep your fingers, where they're safe! Chugga,chugga Gypsy, mosey on home Stop for pizza, dare not share! Be ready to be ready, deep dive time It's a secret, no time to spare! Surprise surprise, so have no doubt Universe is here and aware!

Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 101213	Wed 09/04/24 01:41 AM
I love it, thank you! I like how you captured the essence of playfulness in everyday life. And I like how you expressed the essence of having faith. That releasing resistance, by having no doubts, the Universe will surprise and delight us. Beautiful!

Hammer Joined Thu 07/11/24 Posts: 551	Wed 09/04/24 02:14 AM
Thank you for your comments River

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3270	Wed 09/04/24 03:06 AM
Nice poem .

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 52275	Wed 09/04/24 05:11 AM
A nice write by Hammer Depth in thought Trust in words

Hammer Joined Thu 07/11/24 Posts: 551	Wed 09/04/24 01:13 PM
Thank you Julie, and Vibes for your comments.

StormMessages Joined Thu 07/27/23 Posts: 3424	Sat 09/07/24 03:17 AM
Captured her essence!

Hammer Joined Thu 07/11/24 Posts: 551	Sat 09/07/24 12:59 PM
Captured her essence! And without essential oils!

Hammer Joined Thu 07/11/24 Posts: 551	Sun 09/08/24 04:29 PM
Captured her essence! Do you mean Ginger or Mary Ann? I was going for Mary Ann

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