Topic: 1,2,3
Yaya's photo
Mon 09/02/24 02:43 AM
1 soul
2 heartbeats
3 small words
Infinity and Beyond

Try to get to her
You need to touch her soul
Speak to it
Fall in love with it

Your words touch her lips
The three words she wants
The three she needs
Whisper against her lips

The heartbeat that’s in her
Is the same heartbeat within you
Connecting to each other
Connecting to the soul

Follow her words
Read in between the lines
Listen to everything
You will know what they say

The soul wants you
The heart needs you
The love desires you
Everlasting

Look into her eyes
You will see her soul
Look into her eyes
They will never lie

Whisper against her lips
Whisper to her heart
Whisper to her soul
Whisper those words

Which is important
The mind
The heart
The soul

1 soul
2 heartbeats
3 small words
Infinity and Beyond

JulieABush's photo
Mon 09/02/24 03:08 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

no photo
Tue 10/22/24 08:25 PM
1 soul
2 heartbeats
3 small words
Infinity and Beyond

Try to get to her
You need to touch her soul
Speak to it
Fall in love with it

Your words touch her lips
The three words she wants
The three she needs
Whisper against her lips

The heartbeat that’s in her
Is the same heartbeat within you
Connecting to each other
Connecting to the soul

Follow her words
Read in between the lines
Listen to everything
You will know what they say

The soul wants you
The heart needs you
The love desires you
Everlasting

Look into her eyes
You will see her soul
Look into her eyes
They will never lie

Whisper against her lips
Whisper to her heart
Whisper to her soul
Whisper those words

Which is important
The mind
The heart
The soul

1 soul
2 heartbeats
3 small words
Infinity and Beyond

beautiful

Laska Paul 's photo
Wed 10/23/24 12:57 AM
Your poem does not have an in-built rhythm, rhyme , or a texture , tone and concept . You can improve if you work on it . I'll just say Good to Read .!