Can you rate my profile or suggestions on anything I should do to make it better?

It's a pretty good profile. You did put together a nice text blurb to describe who you are and where you are in life. And the photo is pretty good. You left the headline as the default "Hi.." and you left a couple of the biographical questions unanswered.

Writing explicitly about sexual acts may be a bit of a turn-off for people, so maybe consider rewriting that part, unless you insist that the person you seek must be comfortable talking about that right away. In fact, you might consider including some information about the person you seek, unless you're just not very picky.

I like that your photo shows your face, and with the hat and necklace, there's a style going on. Maybe also post a photo without a hat. Maybe in brighter light.

Anyway, you seem like a good guy, and women will probably see it differently than I do, so you'll probably do alright. If the woman you seek has the naughty side you seem to like, she may be intrigued by this. But for the profile with a somewhat shady photo, the jarring text blurb, and a few details left out, I can only rate it 8/10. Overall a pretty good job.

Good luck!

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