Improvements?

It's good! One of the better ones in fact.

Quite a good start for sure

It's pretty good. Some good photos, and unfortunately Mingle2 ruins the high aspect ratio (tall and narrow) photos so your pic gets stretched horizontally for your thumbnail. Good smile & hair, though. Impressive that you were hanging out with DJT!

The text blurb is almost poetic, but doesn't really say what you're looking for. It says nicely what love should feel like. Not sure how someone looking to date would interpret that. Maybe you could include something to say what kind of person you seek & how you would like to be treated or something.

Overall, good photos, and a well-written, but not very useful blurb. Nothing being a turn-off.

I rate it 9/10. Good work!

Kelly - Improvements ?