I just need an opinion of outsider as to how my profile appears to you guys and what improvements I can make.

Your profile is sweet!
I would perhaps check the crop ratio of your second pic. It seems rather long in height on my phone. Perhaps add a little more to the bio section in terms of a write-up.

Good luck!

Thanks for the feedback appreciate it btw you look stunning

It's fast and flashy and upbeat, and at first glance I'd say quite good.

However, on second glance it's vague. "short dating fun"... what does that mean? It seems to imply sex...
There's no indication whatsoever about anything more long term. Maybe you don't want that at this point in your life, which is okay of course.
But maybe elaborate a little bit more.
Do you want to take the lady out and do and see things, activities?
Or do you want to maybe take her to dinner and then expect/demand to have sex with her for dessert?

You see what I mean (I hope)? It's too vague. Your intentions are not clear...