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Murc
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This is my 1st poem in English as I learned the language two years ago
=-=-=-=-=- The Moon of My Grave -=-=-=-=-= where are you my dark moon did your color drown in the lake of the sky or did your lips get lost at my wailing oh, my moon, my outcry didn't earn anything but agony and my breath is choaked by moaning the bridle of my burried surrows chafes to return ashes to ashes =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-= hope you liked it ![]() Hassan |
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Very good
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thank you
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mmmm, nice
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Noden, MsTeddyBear2u & LAMom
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Your welcome
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Edited by
Murc
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Tue 01/01/08 10:16 PM
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Thank You
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very nice.
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Wow, that is exceptional!
Almost reminiscent of Persian poetry... beautiful, thankyou. ![]() |
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Thank you popcornncoke
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Edited by
Murc
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Wed 01/02/08 10:06 PM
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Thank you Jess642
![]() but I don't think I'm close to that level yet.. something was missing in it comparing to the Arabic version but can't recognize it ![]() thank you again for the wonderful comment |
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