Topic: See me For me
neednogames's photo
Mon 12/31/07 03:55 PM
I wrote this today per a reguest of a woman on another site.
Anyway, you guys have a topic for this so I thought I would share with you. I hope you like it.

Happy New Year!!


"See me For me"

Behind thy eyes lies a Beauty unseen...
Unseen by some-
beyond thy shroud of pulchritude...

Thy is seen through the shallowest of eyes...
Those who gaze upon thy-
With shallow hearts,
Shallow breaths,
Shallow minds-
I need not your time...

Thy time is of total essence...

Thy callith to thee with open minds-
Bringith forth thow with truest hearts-
and lust confined-
I need not want simple minds...

Be there none to challenge?
To challenge the depth within?
Thy only glanced upon-
by thee who carries heart shaped sins?

Be there none-
to see thy beauty within?
Need not look at thy face to see I again...

See me-
for see me now...

Who askith thee again..?

See me-
See Me For Me...

-Ray (neednogames)

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 12/31/07 03:57 PM
Good Write! drinker

msjkk2020's photo
Mon 12/31/07 03:58 PM
sad sad sad sad sad sad Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that could have been written for me tooooooooo...sad sad

tsw123's photo
Mon 12/31/07 03:58 PM
wow, powerful.flowerforyou

tsw123's photo
Mon 12/31/07 03:59 PM
wow, powerful.flowerforyou

neednogames's photo
Mon 12/31/07 04:05 PM
Thank you. I'm glad you all liked it.:smile:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/01/08 07:00 AM
That was really good. Self explanatory. Right on.

Noden's photo
Tue 01/01/08 08:06 AM
Tis something that would be sought as a quote off the pages of Shakespeare no doubt, wonderful play with words, I am sure the person it was meant for would indulge in tasting every word.flowerforyou smokin

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/01/08 08:08 AM
Very goodflowerforyou

TravelArranger's photo
Tue 01/01/08 08:17 AM
Thanks for sharing!